Reviews for Retribution |
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whoissalmon chapter 38 . 4/22/2018 The drama in this chapter was great, I’m really loving Verity’s parts and of course George’s interaction with the Grangers is fantastic. Another wonderful chapter! |
whoissalmon chapter 20 . 4/21/2018 Yet another great chapter! I'm totally loving where the drama is going with this pair, having Sirius and Ginny as the two clueing in is a wonderful decision |
whoissalmon chapter 19 . 4/21/2018 This chapter was phenomenal, and not just because of all the sexual tension and eventual release! No, my favourite part was definitely Sirius. Very well written and-again-humorous. I love the way you're adhering well to the books and including the really important moments. But that whole interaction with Sirius was hilarious and I could read it again and again! |
whoissalmon chapter 14 . 4/20/2018 Oh my gillyweed! This was such a brilliant and hilarious ending to this chapter! I absolutely adore the development of this romance and this just gained so many points, far surpassed any of my (high) expectations. I know it's been a couple months since you updated, but I'm here because of your other long Geomione fic 'The Injunction', which definitely met my need for some long Geomine shipping. I usually read completed fics so this is somewhat of an exception, but I love it! I really hope you complete it. Thanks so much for your great writing and sense of humour! |
LillithBMaven chapter 40 . 4/15/2018 Oh my goodness. So I just found this story and got to ch 50 in literally 2 days. This story is amazing and your writing is absolutely beautiful and so in character. Please, please, please finish this story. I don’t know what to do with myself without knowing how it ends |
LizzyFields chapter 40 . 4/9/2018 I love this story! Will you please continue writing it? |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2018 hii came over from the injunction and i just wanna say that i ABSOLUTELY loved every moment of it |
forthreaching chapter 40 . 4/4/2018 the inhuman screech i let out when i got the email notification for this was perhaps only heard by dogs and dolphins. i needed to reread the entire thing so that i could actually specificy everything i loved sO here goes: Lee and Fred! Stepping up! its such a lovely and unexpected relationship and def warmed the cockles. then, the confusing and genuine feelings right on the home stretch of the bond! the sweet sweet teenage confusion! and i am continually blown away with how you handled the passage of time. i loveed how time seemed to drag when hermione and george were miserable in the start, if that makes ant sense at all. anyway, i absolutely still love how youve blended canon and the story and im so excited to see what happens next even tho i tech know what happens next? thanks for sharing! |
lovemelucky12 chapter 40 . 4/2/2018 Love this story so much! Great work! Can’t wait to see how it ends |
LCB chapter 40 . 3/25/2018 Oh man. |
lfeatherby chapter 40 . 3/23/2018 Oml this story is amazing. I've never really read any Geomione before, but I read some of your Riverdale stuff and decided to check out your profile. I'm glad I did. Keep on writing! |
Aeolus07 chapter 40 . 3/21/2018 Yes! I love this ship so much too! This is my second time reading it. I couldn’t remember the ending so I thought I’d read it again. Well, duh I didn’t remember how it ended because it hasn’t. I still enjoyed it just as much as the first time I read it and I hope you get the chance to finish it someday. Thank you for the great read fellow fanficker |
Sclark4tiger chapter 40 . 3/18/2018 slightly sad I'm all caught up! now I'll have to wait for another chapter... I love love love your story! one of the best I've read. Thanks for sharing with us all. keep up the good work! you literally sucked me in from the first chapter. |
Tara10000 chapter 20 . 3/15/2018 I’m at chapter 20 right now and part of me really wants to slow down and savor the second half, but another part of me knows that is just not possible! It’s tooooooo good! |
TheQueenofErynLagasryn chapter 40 . 3/14/2018 Okay so funny story, apparently I followed this a while ago and I have absolutely zero recollection of it! so I read it and Holy Crap! This is Fantastic! I can't wait for the next chapter! |