Reviews for Retribution |
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![]() ![]() ![]() simply lovely! go on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hoping that they figure out a way to see each other soon. or maybe distance will make them make a move. Cant wait to see what happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dang! Great chapter! I love this story and a fighting, possessive, insanely hot George! Fred being the go-between is so great. I just love him. Can't wait for the next update! Fantastic job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can only imagine how awkward that conversation was for the both of them and the beginning of said shower, but darn - George is hot..can't blame a girl for appreciating him. Hopefully they can both think clearly for a few days to at least start figuring something out or just going with it, either way it'll be entertaining to read about. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story. Cant wait to see how they figure out the break |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, you have an entire playlist, do you now? I may need to get in on that. Good chapter, of course. Although, I must say, there's quite a few moments where I just want to bury my face in my pillow, thinking "Did they REALLY just say that?" Can't wait for Christmas, too! That'll be a fun chapter! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing is marvellous! Thank you for such a wonderful update - although I hardly expect anything not amazing because this story id BLOODY FAB Go Georgie for scaring off Eddie! Bless Harry and Ron for sticking up for her, such sweethearts. And Go Hermione for...everything? Getting George off? She can do no wrong. Oh gosh, I cannot wait for Christmas break! Sneaking around - Molly (someone) catching them - doing the deed - confusion over what they are? You could do something completely unexpected and I would still love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. There aren't words. Some say that it's awkward to review lemon scenes but I wont! That was hot! Thank you for finally resolving some of their tension lol! Now we need some loving between the two! I love fluffy George and Hermione. Fred still cracks me up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel so bad for the both of them, what a horribly delicious dilemma they are in.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very lovely! i wonder when they will come to the conclusion that dating or pretending to dat eis just the easier solution go on! |
![]() ![]() This story is so good. I'm addicted to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GODS! I freaking LOVE this! Looking forward to your next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love you. I love this story. I love your writing. I love this George. I love you for writing this story with this George. HOLY SHIT THAT WAS INTENSE George deserved the payback - good on Fred for being the one to call it! His sweetness and guilt towards Hermione is the cutest thing ever. AND GEORGE FINALLY PUNCHING EDDIE I WOULD PAY TO SEE THAT This is...beyond my range of vocabulary to describe. Your varying sects for the different point of views is written extraordinarily and so, so wonderfully. You have such a talent! The plot is ace. It's a twist on the usual type of accidental love potion but done a hundred times better. I cannot wait to read more! From the looks of it Eddie will be gone now that Hermione and George are...coming together,but perhaps him and Angela are to resurface? Yay for your existence and this story! Exquisite. X |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the newest chapter! This story is just getting better and better! Great job and can't wait for the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go protective George! And slightly possessive/stalker-ish George. Ah, well. I'm not exactly sure as to how to comment on the ending, though... Because... um... welllllll... yeah. Good chapter, though! |