Reviews for Retribution |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Omg I'm just dying over that kiss! That's in my top fav fic first kisses list! |
![]() ![]() I'm following lots of fics right now but none have me hooked nearly as much as Retribution. Love this story, and keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE Fred in this chapter. I wonder what Hermione will think about his plan :) And I'm curious how their winter break will go. |
![]() ![]() Fred has taken a stand. I love the chemistry between George and Hermione and how you portray their different ways with coping with their emotions. I also appreciate how much Lee has gotten an appearance in this fic-I don't see him in stories as much as I'd like. This story is freaking amazing! |
![]() ![]() Love it! Can't wait for the next update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man. George done fucked up now. His plan was a horrid plan. Fred's plan is a horrid plan. Albeit, it was funny that Lee had to look at other blokes' junk. Much too funny. :D I cannot wait for the next chapter. And I hope they both pull their heads out of their behinds and learn to deal with the spell. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() So so good! Go on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Merlin Oh geez I sense an awkward conversation coming this way! Geez, George was a bit of a prat, wasn't he? Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ommmgggggg. This makes me so happy. I love it obviously. Also I was so pleased with how much you kept. Because obviously most of what I typed was just the mad ramblings of me trying to overcome my heartbreak over the previous chapter. I'm just so so pleased over this. "When she pulled the door open a moment later, she found Fred standing against the opposite wall with his hands bunched loosely in his pockets and one foot up with the sole of his shoe against the stone behind him." - this pose, this line, this description is just total sex. I'm using sex as an adjective here, definitely. Why can't fred weasley be real and why can I not have him? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. But that might be because I'm a fremione shipper lol keep up the amazing work update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this is an amazing story love it. Dying to see how George explains this one |
![]() ![]() I really love your story and I'm really anticipating the (hopefully) soon confrontation of their feelings :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() App good! Poor george having been interrupted when he finally finds some relieve! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm addicted to this story right now. Just FYI. Still, it seems that this version of George is not good enough for this version of Hermione. And I want to like George. I want them to get together and live happily ever after. But I don't see how that will happen when George is always so...careless...with her feelings. I do hope he redeems himself somehow. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for being so quick with updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh oh I Well How do I respond? Also, permission to kill George? And the ski trip... How's that going to work? Keep it up! |