OMGG. I just can't deal with this. I am so sad. The descriptions when she entered the room were obviously perfect. Every detail made me feel like I needed to vomit up the pecan pie that I had just at for breakfast (at 6:30 AM because what is moderation.) The image of him between another girl's thighs, looking up at Hermione and she's just dumbfounded that this could happen after she's been fantasizing about him and thinking that they were having a little squabble.. omg. I hope you make him pay, Melissa. MAKE HIM PAY FOR WHAT HE"S DONE.

Super good and hot! Go on!

“Logic and previous experience dictated that if he had seen George accost her and drag her into that alcove, he would have probably said something sooner.” That’s a very in character Hermione thought.
“ "Urrrgh."
The second noise from his throat was far more guttural and Hermione froze. He had made that noise in the alcove, when he was straining so hard against her it felt like he wanted to crawl inside of her. The thought sent a jolt of electricity through her, zapping her nerves.” Yes. Yes to this whole segment because it also sends jolts of electricity to the readers, zapping their collective nerves as well—Also. Too.
“Of course, the urge to pull the pillow away from him and sit in his lap was maddening still, but it was the price to pay, she supposed.” I love how little lustful thoughts are trickling through into Hermione’s mind. Like she’s slowly slipping.
“George's uniform shirt would be open at the top few buttons at the end of the day, like tonight, and when he craned his neck, or stretched it tiredly, that muscle was taut - what was that muscle called? - it didn't even matter because the shirt was loose under his chin and she could see a good bit of neck - that muscle –“ I am very familiar with the trapezius muscle and I adore your usage of it. That muscle. That muscle is very.. masculine. George Weasley’s taut trapezius. –swoon-
“ He shifted to adjust his position and slyly reached behind himself to tug his uniform shirt out of his pants” - This is just such a great detail because I can vividly imagine him doing this, and it is lovely.
"You have to mix a complex potion tomorrow so... you should tell me if you - if you ... want anything," – Sweet lord. This line. Perfect italic usage.
And then just so I don’t have to quote the entirety of George’s POV. I LOVED EVERY WORD OF IT. It was like perfect. And I love that the structure of this part of the narrative slips into stream of consciousness. It’s very well put together and I love it. And it’s wonderful.
This review is humongous. -Kim

I honestly have no idea how to respond to this chapter xD.
I see we're starting to hit that M rating, then?

Loving the story, you are a great writer!

Send them back to a broom cupboard. Better yet, George's dorm room. Someplace they can get closer and warm each other up even better.

Sweet googly moogly.
This is getting intense. George's internal monologue was very illuminating and i loved it. I almost wish Hermione would torture him a little bit eventually. She could be a total tease if she wanted and he couldn't say anything because-He deserves a little suffering.

Man the tension is upping! Go on

Geez, isn't this getting fun! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I love the way you've written both Hermione and George in this story. Two thumbs up :)

Ooh, next chapter please! Great story!

It would be extremely difficult to forgive someone who cast a spell on you to alter your demeanor, especially when that person was supposed to be a friend. I hope Hermione thinks of using a pensieve to allow them to remove the memory and hear George's misspoken spell so they can try to find a remedy.

Really good! Please go on!'

Ok, not cool. Cliff hangers are not cool. Now you had better write the next chapter EXTRA fast, you hear me?

I absolutely love this story! You are such an amazing writer! I love how they have developed over the story so far. This is probably one of my favourite fanfics right now.