Reviews for Retribution
Zeehana chapter 4 . 3/19/2015
I am very curious to see what the spell is
Are the somehow gotten connected kinda like soulbonded sort of spell
They have sort of weird feeling about each other for few days isn't it?
I like the concept as well as pairing of the story
And really looking forward to read more ahead
politelycynical chapter 4 . 3/19/2015
Hermione's obsessive eye wandering reminded me of myself any time I've ever had a crush on anyone. At least she doesn't put her foot in her mouth like I would have though lol.

Very nice chapter. As always, I'm awaiting your update.
HenriaSownbinder chapter 4 . 3/18/2015
Uh oh! Troubling times. George is falling in love with a fifth year and his brother's best friend...this doesn't bode well for him. Wonderful chapter! I love the progression and can't wait for the fine details of that spell!
AubreenaGreen chapter 4 . 3/18/2015
Oh boy is correct. Haha, brilliant as always. I'm too tired to do a full-fledged review right now, but it was great. Keep up the good work!
lagenerale chapter 3 . 3/16/2015
Love the Gred and Forge callback. Loved also the dynamic you wrote between George and Hermione (who is very much Hermione, the way you write her), and of course, between Gred and Forge themselves.

And I'm not exactly sure why, but awww, i really liked the part about Hermione's mum always knowing how to find things in her favourite shade of colour. I suppose it made me think of my own mum.

Lovely writing, all in all. xx
lagenerale chapter 2 . 3/16/2015
Absolutely adore the back-and-forth between Fred and George. One of my favourite parts about their characters, and you've done it perfectly here.

Also, love Fred being the one to answer "Absolutely not!" when Lee asks if they're sure they don't fancy her, haha.
AubreenaGreen chapter 3 . 3/11/2015
You can just see the sparks flying between them ;)
Wonderfully written, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 3 . 3/11/2015
Really sweet! Love it go on
HenriaSownbinder chapter 3 . 3/11/2015
I just love twins. I always wanted JK to go into detail about all the arguments they would have when Hermione became Prefect, but alas, Harry's story got in the way. Hehe Such a good update. Cannot wait for some more.
Politelycynical chapter 3 . 3/11/2015
Well I thought it was lovely. I loved the whole "shut up"/" shut up " thing. And I really enjoyed when the twins were telling Ron to stop being whiny. :). It's very cute. I'm so very excited about the next one.
lakelady8425 chapter 2 . 3/4/2015
Was it intentional that you had George say the wrong words in the spell? In chapter 1 the spell they found was "delinio temperantia" but he cast "delinio tentigo" on Hermione. What will that do to her?
HenriaSownbinder chapter 2 . 2/26/2015
I am actually very worried. I jumped when I read that George had said the wrong spell. I am very curious also. I cannot wait to see what happens next!
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 2 . 2/25/2015
Really lovely! Love this story! Keep on going on!
politely cynical chapter 2 . 2/25/2015
Hurray! Fred and George! I love their back and forth over Hermione being insufferable and horrible. It's cute.

I also loved that little foot stomp of hers in the hallway. Her temper cracks me up.
AubreenaGreen chapter 2 . 2/25/2015
Oooh! I wonder what's going to happen! Keep going; it's amazing!
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