Reviews for Homecoming |
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![]() ![]() The Greengrasses reek of being the instigators of what's going on. My money is on them to be behind the whole dirty war against Kingsley and the muggle business thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "or sluts I know I'll never see again." Wow. You really have no idea how people talk do you? Or how to write sympathetic characters? Or characters in general? It's been years, Brennus. Shouldn't your writing be less hackneyed and shite by now? |
![]() ![]() Great story. I managed to get my lad to return the first HP book out of my book-set today and thinking I need a re-read of the canon stories of JKR (or maybe cheap-out and re-watch the movies, probably both). But, ff is so much better (with better authors). It's hard to stop reading here. It still boogles my mind how you guys (and girls) manage to come up with these elaborate engrossing stories. I wish I had a fraction of your creative writing talent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not a bad story, and I love the plot twist foiling the evil plan. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Officially making a guess here that Mr. Winter is Daphne Greengrass. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story. I particularly liked the bit where Harry and Tonks are talking about how people can change when an overriding theme of the story is a series of descriptions of how people acted in Hogwarts. The inability of the society to let people grow past their sorting at age 11 is rather an interesting one, and the way you poke at it is well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very intriguing start, but as with any fanfiction with mysterious organisations, it seems if they truly do exist Voldemort would've never become as big as they managed to if Department M is as "for the greater good" as they claim. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, just the occasional typo ie it's traffic warden not traffic warder. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story, you should be very proud of your work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your humor! One thing - drop the 'luv' it's not proper english...or not, it is your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A-plus! Very entertaining. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice start, interesting and a bit mysterious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() love that there's no Teddy and Fleur in this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute. I could do with a sequel to this. Couldn't write it but would definitely read it. |