Love this start, It was well written and I really enjoyed this first chapter, going to have to keep reading lol XD

I was actually wondering what the twin thing was going on about while I was reading. I have to say. This is definitely the first different father twin story I've seen. Hope it works out, because the plot and story quality so far have been rather good. Thanks for all you work. Look forward to reading more.

Caspian's father was 6'6, not 6'1.

Awesome.!finally someone write it you please update pretty please with cherry on top?

As far as this story is concerned, Jaime you are the lowest pile of trash. The only crime you are missing is rape. The only reason why I wouldn't want Caspian to execute you is because I don't want him to be a Kinslayer. Losing Tywin is a blow.

Thanks for the update. Nice development on the Army. I will honestly say I was about to suggest such a concept to another Black Prince story.

no?.,

Oh... Ok... Damn man that was quite something

Well, damn. Totally didn't see that coming! Love the way the army worked. :)

poor tywin...dies in the worst ways possible...in canon he dies while taking a dump...here he does because he cockblocked

Great story so far.

Damn. R.I.P Tywin. By the way, I had an idea of how Caspian could deal with the High Sparrow and his flock. Capture him and as many of his followers as he can and send them beyond the Wall to spread the Light of the Seven to the Wildlings.

Hahaha! Death to the craven

Yes! Sansa got de man...
There once was a man named Renly
who sat on a throne made of... I got nothin to rhyme with that

Blind is putting it a bit mildly, don't you think?

Finally.. Please dont go whimpy, "oh sweet Joffberry"