great story

Sad to see that the chapters end here for the story, but I very much enjoyed it and that last cliff hanger was brilliant! Jamie killed Tywin by accident, I could honestly laugh at that in shock. Brilliant writing and I enjoyed reading the 26 chapters of this amazing story.

bro you called him Naruto in chapter one how is this not been fixed lmao

great story, hope you are doing well and able to continue this!

Why are all trueborn children to robert and cercei such sues?

The dialogue of your characters feels like they are from the modern world instead of the middle ages I don't expect you to pull of a Shakespeare but you could at least try to not use modern slangs

My headcanon is that Jaime and Cersei are Aerys kids. Their ridiculous attraction can be explained by this. Cersei reeked of mad Targaryen, and Jamie had the tragic well meaning dumbass Targaryen vibe going. Lol

I’m what universe does a king marry a lady that doesn’t have her maidenhead intact? Lmao

Oi, where’d you go, come back, this is too good to leave unfinished

i really hope caspian will end up w sansa

tyrion shouldve told caspian the truth abt his siblings' parentage

Why abandon a fic this far along into the story. Make it make sense.

damn one hell of a cliffhanger to end the chapter for the years to come, also funny Cersei falls prey to the same thing she did to Caspian and Margaery. Also Tywin 100% had guards outside and shit so they're fucked

Caspian choosing Margaery is the right choice. Arianne is not a Queen, she uses seduction as means to winning which won't work on the big stage. Margaery is the better Queen material.

Cersei looked at the book and could see what Tyrion was pointing out to her, "We have to destroy the book." There was no other way to stop this from being learned.

There's copies of it everywhere...