Robb looked down at the flannel in his hand and then back to Naruto, "You realise we're going to be drinking later on at the feast right?" His royal friend nodded his head, "And you plan to drink before that?" He nodded once more, "...Should I be worried?"

Why is Naruto there? xDD

bruh

I don't think I've ever seen a more Gary Stuish MC in my life. This is Kurosaki Ichigo levels. seriously.
Still I enjoyed reading the story. that definitely says something about the quality of the writing since I normally despise Gary Stus with a passion. Kudos.

Shame this got abandoned this still remains among my favourite GoT fics I ever read

Essentially created another Robert... thought he wasn’t supposed to be like him but he is exactly like him and that’s not how he has been thinking and doing things... mc is a fucking joke and a hypocrite Sooooooooooooo this fanfic officially fucking sucks

Was enjoying this until he denied Robb with him and Sansa. Ruined his character. Fuck the mc. Drop and remove from my favorites

Was eh on this mc but after this chapter? Don’t like him

Fan fiction on level-5/10. The main character likes * cold logic*, but does not use it. Logic dictated that Joffrey should be removed from the throne after the message from Stannis, because Stannis would not lie - he is the same as Barristan, as well as the relationship of his mother as a child to Caspian the murder of Robert's bastards is sufficient evidence of Stannis's words. In addition, the Riverlands and the North had rebelled because of Joffrey, which meant that at least one could become king-to make peace with these regions. And of course Caspian doesn't want the crown and at the same time wants to stop the bloodshed:D

I just wanna say that it would be very hard to cut someone’s hand off if their wielding a spear because it has a way longer reach.

Your not awesome because you haven’t really changed anything besides the stormlands not being with Renly. The point of FanFiction is to change the story not follow the same boring line that canon follows!

So he becomes exactly like his dad even though he said he wasn’t? Was enjoying this until he found out he is having a bastard and practically discards the child lol exact opposite of who he was supposed to be...

Makes no sense for caspian to not kill Joffrey or take the throne to end the war lol

I thought capspian was smart? Hopefully he actually knows that they are he product of incest except for him lol or sadly a drop since it won’t make sense for him to no notice even though he is supposed to be so smart lol

Aw man, I was hoping Caspian would be leaning against the door with a knowing look and Tywin red with anger. But this was just as good! I know it's been a looooong while since you've last updated but please don't give up on this story! Was Caspian's white hair his Targaryen blood coming out? And his comfortableness with fire as well?

that last one was for this chapter