Reviews for A Song of Black & Gold |
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![]() ![]() ![]() please keep going man, this story is too good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Encore! Encore! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update man dude it's been so long |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOOOOO! HOW DARE YOU KILL THIS AT SUCH A CLIFF! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it well enough but it's a little rough for me to continue reading it. You might try to find a beta reader that can smooth out the rough spots. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Also someone asked how they can be twins with different father's. There are some exceptionally rare medical cases where twins have been born with different fathers if the mother slept with two people in a small space of time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great stuff, though I've had to accept as I read on that this will likely not be updated again likely due to your irl commitments as stated in your final AN. Have to say, you've pulled this all together rather well, though I find Tywin's death to be possibly a touch out of place. I assume this was done to seal Jamie and Cersei's fate while freeing Caspin of Tywin's influence, allowing Tyrion to become Warden of the West and Hand of the King. I found it odd that Caspin and Sansa have exchanged zero communication and that no mention of the Night's Watch or the wall has been made at all, even asking for more men or warning of Mance Raider or the dead. Hope that if you write more, that there's some continuation there. Really curious what you're going to do with both Barristan and Dany too, fingers crossed this is one day updated. Thanks for writing it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nothing against your story, but why do all the stories with the second prince always have him leave during Robert and Neds death. I know its for plot purpose but its the same thing every time. I hope this isn't like the others where he just wanders around allowing Joffrey to dick around because he doesn't want to be involved or doesn't have the balls to do anything. Even though I'm complaining I like your story and I'm going to keep reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, so you may have explained this already and I missed it, but how is Caspein Roberts son if him and Joeffery are twins? Maybe I misread something, just asking. |
![]() ![]() "Robb looked down at the flannel in his hand and then back to Naruto" You should probably edit this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol why does it just say naruto |
![]() ![]() ![]() I swear wtf. Caspian is so daft and too honourable, he should’ve realized he’s the true heir and the only son of Robert already! Someone tell him asap dammit! This cringes me sm. Now Joffrey is beginning to abuse Sansa, this won’t happen had Caspian been the king. Dammit. Always do what’s right instead of what’s easy, if taking the throne is the right one then do it even though it’s hard. He seem too weak willed now |