Good:)

I kept rereading a particular paragraph...
I think you named Caspian, Naruto by accident X3
It was actually quite amusing to see that there.

Good start, seems like a interesting story. We will just have to wait and see, and as such, update regularly!

caspian and aria ;)

Great chapter

Great chapter, update soon.

Wow great second chapter
Please update soon

Ahhhh yes a true son of King Robert
Please update soon

interesting beginning i hoped i would be follow by other chapters

Great start please continue.

Another trueborn Baratheon fanfic, I fucking love most of them and this one will hopefully be no different. Very good idea with the heteropaternal superfecundation concerning Joffrey and Caspian. Good spelling and character ideas the complete heterochromia difference in Caspian(one eye blue the other purple) very interesting and it makes me wonder if Robert would love Caspian slightly less because of the purple eye and its relevance to house Targaryen. Completely agree with your opinion on Daenerys and her absurd good luck. I take it you will pair Caspian with a character just please don't pair him with Arya I have seen way too many. I really hope this story continues with updates as many stories are abandoned early on and I will try to support this one all I can. I actually was curious of the heteropaternal superfecundation with Joffrey and an oc character before so it is quite hilarious that this would happen I wondered if Stannis would think that he is trueborn if he was a twin, you could have Melisandre see it in the flames for an easy up the great work and the updates, sorry for the long review!

Interesting

Interesting beginning of story, keep going, update soon.

The case in which you have twins with differing fathers is called Superfecundation. No enough of that.

He doesn't suck up to Cersei. He called out Joffrey's lie. He saved Sansa's Direwolf. He is good friends with Robb. All in all good.

The most unique feature is Edric Storm being his squire. If you recruit Mya Stone and Gendry Waters into his merry band of bastards then call me impressed.

eye spy with my little eye... Another brilliant Trueborn fic!

While one could say this type of story is most definitely not original - both your plot and character are; this largely being that unlike other stories he isn't your carbon copy OP Mary Sue - damn the guy even has character [lazy, but sarcastic, more of a laidback and taller Tyrion with a dash of YoungerRobert]; and he's got a bodyguard ['Squire'] that is his halfbrother.

Quite frankly you just need him recruiting all his local brothers, arming them the same way as him, and you've got an elite guard of identical [when their visors are down] bodyguards. and with their famed Baratheon strength, they could all be hammer wielders.

But I confess, I'm getting off track - brilliant fic, and please post more chapters...

Kunneg_Andris

PS: Black Prince refers to Edward the Black Prince, son of Edward III, first Duke of Cornwall and first of the reinstated prince of Wales - first prince of Wales to die before becoming king. his son was later betrayed by the Plantagenet's. and If there is anybody who doesn't know about Caspian, than we know why the older generations complain about the youth of today!