more coming? if not add complete to the story

I love this story so much!

I should have reviewed for the last few chapters but I love this story too much to not hit next as soon as I finish the chapter! Aunt Kate? I love it! I can imagine her as the boss sitting watching her people work! I am really looking forward to the rest of this!

It is perfect!

This is the best! I love this idea of genre especially with pre exsisting characters, like a one off special episode and this is how it should be!

Seriously, the way this plays out in my head is just amazing!

This just keeps geting better and better!

Yes! Yes! This is awesome! I want it now! I want it to be real so i can see the costumes and sets in real life instead of just in my head!

This is great!

I must say that I do not usually enjoy stories from a first person perspective but your description intrigued me and I just had to read the story. You write the film noir style narrative very well and I can't wait to read more. You may very well convert me to a first person lover