Reviews for RWBY's Little Monster
Guest chapter 2 . 2/13
10 out of 10 would recommend
cdonovan chapter 2 . 12/21/2020
Good read!
I enjoy stories like this that use nonhuman characters
The King Zhaul chapter 1 . 9/25/2019
This once again proves that good story material have the high possibility to be abandoned.
Good fic Dead fic
Guest chapter 2 . 7/13/2018
the fifth monster is the Gorgan
NightHawk The Warrior chapter 2 . 4/28/2018
Never thought I'd see a story like this. Please continue!
Deathrex007 chapter 2 . 1/29/2018
its story was good but its 2018 what happened?
Subject-element-1-1-5 chapter 1 . 10/19/2017
I love it please keep going it's better then most of the story s I've read with the wrath
GrandDane chapter 2 . 5/13/2017
This is definitely the best evolve story I've read so far.
Too bad it seems pretty dead.
TerrorCooper chapter 2 . 12/15/2016
Oh! Oh! I have an idea! how about you have each monster type hatch out either in the order they were released (Goliath, Kraken, Wraith, Behemoth, Gorgon), or in order of smallest to largest (Wraith, Gorgon/Goliath, Goliath/Gorgon, Kraken, Behemoth)? Oooooohhhhhh, I can only imagine the look on the faces of Team JNPR, Ozpin, Glynda and everyone else when they discover the monsters! I'd willingly bet that Gorgon is the Awaiting Designation monster, and that even Ozpin would be openly shocked when Team RWBY reveals what are essentially now Ruby Rose's adopted children, and Yang Xiao Long's adopted half nephews and/or nieces. Also, at what point in the timeline does this take place? Plus, 5 eggs5 monsters, YA' DON'T BLOODY NEED TO GET RID OF ONE OF THE OTHERS YA' DUMB-DUMB! Unless two of them were of the same species, then: D'OH! In terms of names, I myself cannot think of anything, unfortunately, but I would suggest names that a) go with the naming theme of Remnant's version of humanity and b) fit the individual creature that is being named. For now though, I say:- BYYYEEE!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/14/2016
It's a good story but it's sad that it might not be updated
delta2177 chapter 1 . 12/10/2015
i feel this should keep going it is pretty good i liked it far as the monsters go i am thinking it will be fun to see :)
Guest chapter 2 . 9/27/2015
*smacks myself in the face* ahem, I mean can you please update soon? XD

GXY-2013 chapter 2 . 6/27/2015
This is good. And what if RWBY find a way to communicate with monsters, like the Wraith give them telepathy, unknown to the rest of Team RWBY? And when do you think the Hunters will show up?

Keep up.
erching chapter 2 . 6/14/2015
hope you continue this is quite original
alexkehling chapter 2 . 5/31/2015
Well, I just looked up some info on the "5th monster" and if it isn't the parasite like monster that is shown in the video during the early development of the game, then it is quite literally something that is a monster made of monsters then :P...
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