Reviews for Chrysochlorous |
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Rai chapter 19 . 10/17 BEST HP X TWILIGHT CROSSOVER I HAVE EVER READ! KUDOS |
Guest chapter 10 . 10/17 You're killing me omg they're so perfect |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/17 WTF THIS IS AMAZING |
Bob chapter 19 . 4/23 Never finished. |
Bob chapter 15 . 4/23 Vampires do breed. There are storys on it in |
Bob chapter 12 . 4/23 The indians are not werewolves. Thier shapeshifter wolves . They can turn any day. Werewolves can only change around a full moon. |
Bob chapter 11 . 4/23 is over 400years old you had said he was only 300 |
Bob chapter 10 . 4/23 Correction Harry was a year and a half when his parents died. |
Bob chapter 2 . 4/23 Nikki Reed is so much more than a Vampire. |
ReadingAddict335 chapter 19 . 4/18 First time reading an Hp x Twilight crossover and it it absolutely amazing. I was so hooked on the back and forth between Harry and Ros. Lovely writing and hope you finish this. Cheers |
0rf4n3d chapter 19 . 9/2/2023 I enjoyed this pairing so much more than I expected to. Harry and Rosalie's journey to become what they are to each other now has been excellent. Loved the Trials Death has been putting Harry through and I'm really curious what the Cloak Trial would've been. I've seen older stories be updated so I'll follow just in case. Thanks and hope you're well! |
thomaspheasant chapter 19 . 6/29/2023 please update immediately |
Lordofslytherin692 chapter 19 . 5/29/2023 well, it's a shame, but I'm guessing this story is dead. |
Elfin69 chapter 19 . 5/23/2023 Oh please continue this, it is really good so far and I hope that your Muse will come back one day. |
kageknuser2710 chapter 1 . 3/27/2023 Honestly killed me with the Edward/Rosalie thing... A major sticking point with Edward is that he is a virgin, because he was raised Christian and doesn't believe in sex before marriage. He is also insanely afraid of having no soul and going to hell because of his mere existence. This just messed up his whole character for absolutely no reason. Heck, Bella was Edward's first kiss as well. Also, Rosalie didn't touch a man until Emmett came by, because of the trauma the gangrape put her through. She kept herself locked, until someone she loved came by to put her broken pieces back together. What you did just cheapened their characters horribly. Damn. This honestly ruined your otherwise decent writing and idea for a plot. OOC is never a good idea, especially when it's in their canon pasts. Had they changed after meeting Harry, fine. Setting up this for whatever reason just messed up their most notable personality traits. |