Reviews for Betrayal in the Dark
Musette Fujiwara chapter 7 . 11/13/2010
TriGemini chapter 7 . 8/24/2003
This sounds like an interesting story. Looking forward to more.
Princess of Darkness6 chapter 7 . 7/29/2003
hasnt ginny realized draco hasnt like.. slept w/ her yet? or maybe he has? has he? it is their honeyroom...

A short history of nearly everything.. lol is that a real book? I could picture it...

geeh draco thinks they already did it.. how much of a whore does he think she is? he's the whore!
Princess of Darkness6 chapter 6 . 7/29/2003
non descriptive sex scenes are R... have u seen american pie.. that's rated R.. that kinda stuff is wut u can write.. not too much of it as it would turn in nc-17...

wow he is beginnin to truly lust after her.. lol.. no second hand goods for malfoy uh?
Princess of Darkness6 chapter 5 . 7/29/2003
argh stupid man whore lol.. is he gonna actually fall for her eventually?
Princess of Darkness6 chapter 4 . 7/29/2003
nice treat! hehee man draco's such a whore...
Princess of Darkness6 chapter 3 . 7/29/2003
ahh he wants to use the malfoy charm on her.. wut a lil prick... seducin her to death.. that wus in sum movie I saw..
Princess of Darkness6 chapter 2 . 7/29/2003
irk love sure is blind.. hope ginny remembers the 'old' sayin.. "chicks before dicks" lol how vulgar P

draco sure is sure of himself to just admit to all that...
Princess of Darkness6 chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
yes! catch that lil bastard! hehe
HarleyB123 chapter 6 . 6/29/2003
R would be swearing, gore, and all that stuff
Lady Limey chapter 6 . 4/18/2003
Alexandra Trent chapter 6 . 3/16/2003
So far so good. Draco is jelous...hhehehe. Ah, ppor Ginny...Draco's a real...*...or really evil person! So there! LOLZ! Please continue!
Guest chapter 6 . 3/16/2003
really good
a person chapter 6 . 3/16/2003
The chapters are kinda of short...but i really like it. I hope you update more often then you have i tend to lose interest easily
Cupiditatis chapter 6 . 3/16/2003
Really good story, but could you please write longer chapters? I was just beginning to sink into the story when it stopped. So please update soon!
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