Reviews for Bath Zest
Lenny chapter 1 . 5/25/2017
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Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2017
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lucinahasnoboobs chapter 1 . 1/15/2017
the start is too long
Glen chapter 1 . 11/13/2016
I really think you should add this in the humour genre as well, cuz damn that was hilarious! Not to say that it wasn't sexy, because it was, but it's also delightfully humourous as well that it's a shame it does not have the humour genre. Thanks for writing this!

Something to note: I don't think a person in the throes of pleasure would say you're making me lose my sanity with that squiggly line at the end. Perhaps it's just me, but i really really don't think so. It's quite too long for someone almost incoherent due to pleasure. Might i suggest you're driving me mad/insane? Other than that, it was quite good.

On second thought, perhaps if you add other stuff like she groaned, she moaned or something, the aforementioned line wouldn't seem too awkward. Something to consider?
AkioKuro chapter 1 . 10/7/2016
This. Was. Perfect. XD
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2016
Robin X Chrom is OTP
AishaSiren YT chapter 1 . 5/10/2016
Byakko ShadowKikyo chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
not bad
SapphiraTheTacticianXRobin chapter 1 . 5/28/2015
I loved it!~ /
Gunlord500 chapter 1 . 2/23/2015
Haha, nice lemon! Glad to see you back :D