|Reviews for Becoming|
| Void Personified chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
I like it. A lot, actually. Just one thing; whenever a new person speaks, you start a new line. Otherwise, the dialogue runs together.
| Emma Stargaze chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
This would definitely explain a lot of things. Excellent work! I could visualize everything, feel every emotion... I never thought of how Cecily would take the news of William's death, mere days after having rejected him.
| Simmel chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Well done indeed! It's great! And it makes sense, too.
| TravelingRoses chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
This is an awesome story, I love it.
| midnightangelofhate chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
this is a good story
i like the pairing
| kiskool chapter 1 . 12/6/2002
Omg. I don't see why you haven't gotten tons of reviews already. This is brilliant! You are god! I boq to you. Please continue. Every since they re introduced her in as Halfrek in Older and Far Awaw I have been rooting for Halfrek/ Spike. Or something like this. :D