|Reviews for Witches of Westfield|
| kingpj999 chapter 2 . 9/8
I'm kinda lost for the massive info dump by describing ome manor.
| Salvador Suarez chapter 36 . 6/22
Wow! just wow! I’ve been reading fan fiction since 2006.. and to think that I found this story in 2023…and I have to say this is by far one my favorite stories ever… next to Browncoat, Greeneyes and Altered Destinies…
I’ve been reading fan fiction for years and I’m surprised I’ve never read this one before… Thank you for finishing it,, it’s hard when you find a good story and the writers can’t seem to finish them. I’m not a writer but I can imagine how hard it must be to start and finish a story when dealing with real life also. This was truly excellent.
As for pairings Harry/Hermione and Harry/Luna have always been my favorites.
Once again thank you.
| Jetstream chapter 11 . 6/10
Wasn't it Crabbe who killed himself with fiendfyre?
| bramscan92 chapter 2 . 6/2
Well shirt, after reading for a while I think this maybe not as I expect...
Nice work but shiiiittttt... What kind of harem is this...
Well I'm out
| bramscan92 chapter 1 . 6/2
This probably the best fanfiction version I read, I still in chapter 1 thoo,
But very nice work
| bramscan92 chapter 8 . 6/2
Yo wtf, "my dearest harry"? And that comes from harmonies?
Don't she supposed to be with Ron? I mean, they share kiss during the war...
Well . .. I'm sorry, I know it's fan fiction, I just suprise how it turn out...
| Now Account chapter 36 . 5/30
This was an almost believable harem story, and I say that with respect. It was a bit much at times, but overall rather well executed.
All in all, the story was very well written.
One thing that disappointed me was how easily Harry accepted going to Azkaban. After all the talk about how his promise to Anna was one he couldn't afford not to keep he just gave up? I would have liked a situation more like in "The Sum of Their Parts" with Harry ready to take on the whole wizarding world for his little girl. You could've still had Hermione save the day with the (peaceful) solution.
Otherwise I enjoyed it very much.
| A10riddick chapter 1 . 3/1
| Just William chapter 9 . 2/27
A couple of typos "peek" , should be "peck" and "St Mongos", should be "St Mungo's".
| Just William chapter 8 . 2/27
A couple of typo's that need correcting, "was devoted, abet reluctantly", should be "was devoted, albeit reluctantly" AND "I gave him a peek on the cheek" should be, "I gave him a peck on the cheek".
| KoldT chapter 36 . 1/11
A very, very enjoyable story. Imaginative and well woven.
| KoldT chapter 27 . 1/11
| KoldT chapter 23 . 1/11
| KoldT chapter 7 . 1/10
The story is going well.
| NCC1701D USS Enterprise chapter 22 . 11/8/2022
I meant to say Harry would be angry, offended and would likely feel disgusted that his wife, or anyone for that matter went and fucked each other behind his back, IN HIS OWN HOME! WHERE THEY WERE GUESTS! Stupid slags clearly have no respect for him not to mention the fact that Tracy hates Harry 90% of the time and like the hypocrite she is wants to get with him too. It's disgusting behavior