RIP WOFSB

Looking forward to Chapter 22.

Hokage obito! My guy/ or sis you are a beast for making this happen I always wondered how obito would be as a Hokage and I like to see that he’s getting down to business and not being a stale fart in the office lol

Good story

I know you get a lot of hate from some of these reviewers, but i personally love your story. Everything in it was nigh-perfect. Though at the time the neglect trope might have not been overused, it is now and that is the only minor (read: actually minor, no bullcrap) annoyance i have. I know it is abandoned but don't at all think this is a dumpsterfire trash maggot fest. Definently in my top 3 naruto fanfiction I have ever read. Good on you hidaruma!

You disgusting pedo incest fuck

Looking forward to Chapter 22.

i agree heavily jiraiya wasted that train trip so massively. naruto should of came back close to kakashi level is not surpassing him

I have something to say to any flamers sometimes life isn't fair it may seem that it should be but it's not life and death are two sides of the same coin and you should know eventually everybody dies and eventually love dies as well loved ones die loved ones rise but never forget love finds a way to be rekindled

In this case I would almost say that the inevitable death of Mikoto was always a possibility Itachi got sick too from a mission that he did in the land of swamps so it's really not all that unusual it could be something she developed quite a while ago or it could be something recent too who's to say only the author can know

ngl I'm kinda happy its droped as i would hate to see you kill off another important character XD, it was a good read tho i guess

I don't care about your excuses your a fucking cunt and I this isn't one piece, I love this story but this chapter just made all the love disappear, the only real relationship development in the entire story and you just kill it off for the sake of making them stronger it's stupid and cliche af

I really have to ask, but did you get inspiration from other anime, because I clearly see two references from other anime:

Entei, is from Pokemon, with the name matching, since it does translate to Flame Emperor.

The second is from Beyblade...rather the first installment from the early 2000s, since Kai Hiwatari owns the Bey Dranzer, which is a phoenix.

Story was not good it's just as terrible as the other neglected Naruto stories

fuck that, taking ramen from naruto. dumbest shit ever