you say you find incest interesting but you wouldnt date your sister would you? although if you would, you a clown

My apologies I reviewed without reading the end note

Continua con la historia por favor

Gran historia

What happened to not being able to use any other element?

LISTEN
Originally, I was kinda worried that you were gonna make Naruto extremely OP considering he got access to a Chakra Fruit and Haki right off the bat and then proceeded to curb-stomp every fuckin enemy he came across in the early chapters, but then he fought Ichibi!
And like, omg, that was actually *hard* for him to do? Crazy!
And then with Jugo, where he finally takes significant damage in a fight for the first time!
And I'm just like, "Well, he didn't get fucked up toooo bad! Maybe if he just trains his body a little more, he'll be good!"
AND THEN U BRING OUT FUCKIN BLACKBEARD ZETSU AND NARUTO GETS **FUCKED** UP!
AND BY THAT POINT, I'M FUCKIN SCARED AND CRYING AND HYPED AF BC THAT MEANS HE HAS SOME ROOM FOR ACTUAL GROWTH!
AND THEN AFTER THAT FIGHT, WE SEE THE AFTERMATH, AND I'M JUST LIKE, "WHERE TF ARE THEY GONNA GO FROM HERE?! IS HE DEAD?! DID HE LOSE FOREVER?! WHAT IS HE GONNA DO WITHOUT HIS SHARINGAN AND CHAKRA?!"
AND THEN BAM, THE FUCKER HAD A SNEAKY *SECOND* EYE HIDDEN AWAY AND HIS HAKI AND NATURE ENERGY IS JUST AS POWERFUL OR MORE THAN CHAKRA AND LIKE
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
ALL THESE TWISTS!
THIS IS SO GOOOOOOD!

MAN THIS IS FUCKING COOL

So tbh the writing is decent but the content is subpar and convoluted... not trying to hate just had a very hard time reading this up until thos point.

Yeah the akatsuki is just to overloaded in my opinion and zetsu having a fruit is a bit too much

Ohh I beg of you not to make this some sort of fanfic where the mc gets a fruit but then literally everyone then gets a fruit too like writers always make it if you are involved with the main character you get to have a fruit

So he dislikes using weapons but uses a staff which is a weapon

neji

Fking genjutsu isn't real so not good what not even using kenjutsu or ninjutsu fking idiot

He better be able to use chakra still man if not I’m dropping this

sad this story ended.