This story is quite good, it’s a pity it is dead.

LMAO This is really cringey! Why would Mikoto be paired with Naruto! We all know Mikoto is way older than him lolllll!

this shit is going down hill hella fast

why can naruto use hyoton ace said him self that if he ate the fruit he couldn't use any other releases and what was that about in the last chapter about he couldn't be hit by one of those punches or he would slow down? he is a logia for god's sake he can't be hit without haki

This is just forced, man it just takes out the fun, I mean since when do you put high chunnin level ninja in a small task force to hunt Akatsuki, I mean they are the weak link especially so since they are the target, for Naruto canon it was ok since he was the strong like and hunting Akatsuki would have protected his friends by distracting their attention, but now with them being this weak it feels stupid.

this chapter caused me to stop reading because you added characters from one piece to this story I was fine with ace and naruto but this was to much

JESUS MOTHERFUCKING CHRIST MAN! DONT TELL ME THIS IS ANOTHER HAREM FIC! Trust me, I've seen enough harem five in my lifetime.

The story is good but I've got a few problems with it:you are going too fast,slow down detail the scenes a bit more expand the scenes(it doesn't matter if there are less scenes per chapter)

Your explanation is kinda stupid...(naruto had an entire HALF of kurama's chakra while two of them have a small bit less than half and the third one has a small amount)and naruto was completely fine alone without any help

pathetic no words just pathetic , naruto working with orochimaru how does that even happen he was the one to kill the shukaku if he really was working with orochimaru then he would keep their weapon alive , and 2nd of all I started hating every single line of the story after mikoto died . I really liked the Naruto x Mikoto pairing .

ПУСКАИ НАРУТО СИЕСТ ОСТАЛЬНЫЕ ДИЯВОЛЬСКИЕ ФРУКТЫ ВСЕ 5 ЭЛЕМЕНТОВ ФРУКТ БЕЛАУСА ФРУКТ ТЬМЫ.СВЕТА.ЛЬДА.ЛАВЫ И ТД КАРОЧЕ ДАИ НАРУТО ВСЕ ДИЯВОЛЬСКИЕ ПЛОДЫ ВСЕ И ПУСТЬ ОН ИХ СИЕСТ
Я ХОЧЮ ЧТОБЫ НАРУТО СТАЛ БОГОМ В СВАЕМ МИРЕ И ПУСТЬ ТОЛЬКА У НЕГО БУДЕТ ЭТА СИЛА ПЛОДА

Reading Jiraiya's suspicions of Naruto makes me think of the meme "Amazing, every word of what you said is wrong"

Why is Kakashi a lazy pervert if Obito is still alive?

please do not include satsuki in the pairing

Man this story a trash, literally like any other neglect fics