I knew you would kill mikoto, that was so obvious. people usually do that to awaken some Sharingan and stuff, pretty basic. zetsu got a little too strong though. you're probably gonna do something about the Uzumaki boy, he's probably gonna be the Sasuke of this story.

YOU ARE STILL ON A HIATUS

naturally was horribly misspelled

Sucks

Yep, it's even worse than I thought holy fuck was Mikoto played off horribly. I was getting worried but seriously? Seriously? He's supposed to be young like under 13 here and you're making him hit on a widow? Even then if all of this happened and she's somehow into it...I can't man that's just...ugh. If this starts doing crappy smut I'm gone this is the first time you've actually pissed me off.

Thinking about your interpretation of chakra I like it better than Kaguyas fruit and her weird-ass backstory. At least yours make sense compared to some I'll not mention.

The incest is not a thing I'm really into reading or even thinking about and if it actually goes through I'll probably stop reading, but you do whatever you have the most fun with man.

There are a few problems here and there grammar wise, but it's nothing too bad so keep it up!

I've been actually wishing that this fanfic would be continued because I honestly like the idea and naruto's personality, yet I don't think that's going to be. If there're any plans to continue this, I'll be more than wating for them to happen.

to loose an eye is very dangerous, their total field of vision is diminished. And problem with his body, really? Sakura can heal chakra burn from Kyuubi cloak so Tsunade can do it too! Maybe some remnants of scars would remain, but they would bit by bit with time.
There is too much inconsistencies in this story.

so that's just an excuse to give him a few scars to make him "badass" (I mean an "emo"). By the way, Minato is a fucking kage and one of the fastest shinobi of his time, so not reating for 6 seconds when someone is in danger is just IMPOSSIBLE! Although they neglect Naruto, they won't let him die in front of them for fucking sake.

people only have a single nature affinity except if they have a kekkei genkai. In addition, even if you don't have an affinity, you can learn any basic element with hard work. Why the fuck people don't respect Naruto lore. And what the fuck with that bullshit about age.

what about general education? The academy was also a place to learn basic education but if he isn't taught or trained anywhere...

Noice

Temp hiatus has been 4 years now? Guess its permanent?