Reviews for The Will of Fire Still Burns |
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![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great prologe and i think you should continue. If you keep your atory at the pace its going it will be nice and long and not rushed so keep it up. Also the story will be good if you dont turn it into a cliche by making him forgive his family or stop acting how he does. No, i think you should keep him indifferent for the story to his parents and then you will have a good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start. I'm curious about something, though: how in the world does Kushina forget about the fact that Naruto exists when she's apparently trying to keep Naruto in a position to be a child as long as possible...and out of love, at that? I just find this to be a bit contradictory, and would like to see this discrepancy explained or cleared up, if possible. I'll follow this one to see where it goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story can't wait too see more. Also is Naruto going to have similar powers that of Ace's and is Naruto going to hold back alot in the Academy? |