I'm touched, that's all I could say after reading it all.

That was a wonderful story. It litterally made me cry that Team Rocket forced poor Pikachu to evolve. ;( I'm glad that I read this story.

...you're evil.

GO LANCE GO!

Wow.. Just.. wow. This has got to be the best Pokemon story I've read in _quite_ a while. Shame the traitor was Lance, though T_T Really liked him.

I absolutely love this fic. Best Pokemon one I've ever read. The ending rocks. You almost had me crying there at the end. I wish I could write good endings for my ficcys. All my endings are really lame. Great job, Heath 9!

You should try to change this so it's origianl fiction instead of a fan fic and get it published! I would buy it! That is the best fan fic I have ever read! Awesome! I liked the ending, even though it was kind-of sad... You're a really great writer! This deserves to be published!

Have you been watching YGO lately, because Lance sounds like a duelist. "Do not underestimate the power of my dragons!" Now add "Blue eyes white dragon, WHITE LIGHTNING ATTACK!" and there you have it. Yu-Gi-Oh!

oh! Crepy! I like the dramatic-ness! You should read my pokemon fan fic. It's not nearly as good as this, but it's okay...

Actually, having beaten pkmn Gold Version several times, I wasn't that shocked... Oh well.

Really good! But you know Arcanine is six feet tall, right?

hey guess wat? i love the story so much i printed out the whole thing for my scrap book of charinite thing as great how u created a pokemon all by ur self! o by the way chopstick mafia GET A LIFE U DO NOT NO WAT GOOD WRITING IS EVEN IF IT WAS TATOOED TO UR ASS!SO DO NOT FLAME HEATH WEN SHE DID A REALLY GREAT JOB! IF I HAD TO PIK OUT THE TOP 10 STORIES I WOULD PIK The Phantom Rider AS #1 AND I AM NOT LYING!SO SHUT THE F- UP CHOPMAFIA AND ANY 1 WHO WANTS RO FLAME HEATH OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN LIKE THE ASSES U R AND BEAT UR F-EN ASSES ALL THE WAY FROM OHIO TO CHINA U ASS HOLES!

hey heath ty ty cos u used my 1st name so i thank you!sara is my name

this is so goddam stupid. you lazy dumbass. I just about kill over in boredom. Just reading this made me want to set myself on fire.

YOU SUCK Bwahaha-Ga.

POKEMON! Get a life. Stop playing with those stupid plasic cards you call your life and get a friggin job. Its just horrible- like... "a ghost in the night." Anywho it was fun flaming your dumbass story. KISS MY ASS AND GO BACK TO KINDERGARDEN! AH hahahahahh!

This was good. Write more pokemon stories!