|Reviews for The Natural Order of Things|
| CawcawMudapaka chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Come on! Don't just leave a beautifully written fanfiction unfinished.
| Silvanesti chapter 3 . 11/30/2010
Oh please, you can't just have left it like that, I want to know the rest! Please write more, you write so well and there are to few stories about these two.
| Graffiti My Soul chapter 3 . 9/18/2010
I'm amazed that you've written this well enough that it...works.
| jackson chapter 3 . 7/3/2010
why is there no more of this TT-TT I love this story so much.
| bgreenwivy chapter 3 . 11/29/2008
I think I may have reviewed this before but it seems to get better everytime I read it. I hope that this is continued somewhere and I can find it.
| dgpolo chapter 3 . 9/3/2007
"Neville quietly standing by himself next to the greenhouse was the Natural Order of Things."
"Though, Neville noted with some interest, he was using the hand which held the freshly dug Andol Root, thus leaving behind clumps of soil in his normally pristine platinum hair. Yes, there was most certainly something wrong with Draco Malfoy."
"Hmm, you Slytherin's must have a more structured sense of loyalty than the Gryffindors do, then."
Draco couldn't help but laugh at that. "Damn, Longbottom, there aren't a lot of students who can claim to be on the receiving end of hexes from both sides. It must take real skill to be that unwanted."
So, So good. So funny and right. By the dates it looks like you are not adding any more to this. That is really too bad, it really is one of the best I've read. Please if you are still out there somewhere, consider finishing this.
| I'dBeSullenWithoutTheCullens chapter 3 . 8/8/2007
| a is for action chapter 3 . 8/2/2007
It's so ironic that when Draco tells himself not to think of anything distracting, he imagines having "fun" with Neville. XD
| DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 3 . 7/31/2007
update! please, for your own sake. or neville's going to send his man-eating plant after you. lol. great chap!
| DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 2 . 7/31/2007
omg. neville is such a great character, cuz you can do so much to him! there's neville coming out of his shell, secretly brave! neville, shy and sweet!neville, vegeful!neville, mysterious!neville, etc! it's so exciting, and i love your neville.
| DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
Just the way this story is written is enough to make me swoon!
| Path Walker chapter 3 . 6/10/2007
Draco brewed a potion with a hard-on? This is a great story. Please finish it.
| Sailor GaOn Donut chapter 3 . 4/21/2007
wierd and cool
| Limit chapter 3 . 4/7/2007
My first DracoNeville and i'm really enjoying it!
hehe. i like how you've manipulated Neville's personality for your purposes, because, frankly, it makes him more likable. and a little more real.
I can't wait to read the next chapter, so please update soon!
| Viktoria chapter 3 . 3/21/2007
very hilarious- I love Neville, he actually seems "cool" in a seriously dorky way.