Some spelling and grammar errors, but comprehensive and managing to read like one of the more interesting history books otherwise - which I assume is the tone you were going for. The consistent errors were these: 'imortal' should be 'immortal', with two 'm's, and 'deadra' should be 'daedra', with the 'a' before the 'e'. As a side note, singular on daedra is daedroth, and daedra is itself plural. Most of the grammar errors are capitalization: you miss it at the beginning of new sentences sometimes, but that's all fairly nitpick-y so while it's something to keep an eye on it's probably not worth going back to correct it.

got to say this is still one of my favorite reads hope to see and im kinda disappointed i honestly thought there be a few more references to the Ayleids since they were the ones who harnessed the power of the stars varla stones and welkynd stones for example but hey i enjoyed it nonetheless keep up the good work hope to see more

Great chapter!

I love little tali and garrus. All can say is I hope that they spare the innocent bartarians cause from what I understand most of their own population are slaves

I will kinda miss aria cause I've always found her to be an interesting character

Great chapter! I love this

Just found this again and re-read it in an afternoon.
I love this story so much.
Thank you for writing it.

Oh yeah. The Batarians are fucked.

okay, i have no idea how you can make this work, but im gonna give this story a try after my recent 300hour skyrim run

The Mass Effect ships only a few hundred meters long at best 400m, compared to a 3-4km ships of the Empire they are merely fleas

If the day to day language is old imperial does that mean there's a new imperial?

mordin is the only salarian that I can think of that I actually like

This was a fun read. Hope you are able to come back to it someday. Thanks again for writing it! :)

Honestly forgot how fun this story was, good re-read. Thanks for writing it. :)

But still, why no DragonbornxSerana.