Reviews for Shards |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It grates on my nerves just how wrongly they are going about things. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m surprised Lisa hasn’t figured out that Junior could have survived after she got her Aura unlocked. But yeah, the parallels between Yang and Glory Girl are strong. Decent story, some of the writing is rather simpler though, just making statements, this person did this then this person did that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Worm is one of my favorites. I recently looked at RWBY Season one (so many interesting things, 24 hours in the day) and went looking for a Worm RWBY story. nice thanks |
![]() ![]() I liked the chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think the gang needed this moment to mourn, but also the justification for it is a bit iffy/ sure, they're visiting a monument to honor an excellent Huntress, okay, but "It's not often a Huntsman dies"? I got the impression that the opposite was more the case, all things considered. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that ending is gold.. wish to have more tho.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you'd like to do or see more of this fic, hit me up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just so waiting for the moment it dawns on them that everyone on Remnant who has their aura unlocked gets durability and regen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this so far. I'm looking forward to when Tuckson calls Taylor eventually. I hope that the people from Earth get some ability that makes them better? It must suck to be at the norm for people in Remnant when they were previously the best of the best. Also I'm betting Lisa will figure out Ozpin's reincarnation eventually, before he dies. Maybe some blackmail because of it? I was also wondering if aura is used for their parahuman powers, and if they will also be getting semblances? Oh, that would probably just be something that works with their powers, boosting them. Anyway, love it so far! |
![]() ![]() Nice chapter. Although sadly 8t seems the fic is discontinued... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dunno if you're still taking suggestions on names for this chapter, but Ochre is the word for, specifically, RED natural clay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh you poor, innocent Faunus... You will learn to fear the BEEEES! |
![]() ![]() keep up the great work so are you going to continue this fanfiction |
![]() ![]() I feel like Lisa's ability is being severely underestimated. She should have been able to tell that junior wasn't dead. Also the way yangs semblance is described is flat wrong |