|Reviews for Unexpected Pleasures|
| lsass.exe chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
I like this. Well writen and kinda cute.
| Mrs. Potter Chance chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Great story, very amusing!
| hoglee chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Very heart-felt and well-written, and the end is perfect. Fantastic story.
| juliles chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
This was so hot and well written! i liked it a lot.
| Smayz chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Mmmm, that was amazing. I love the idea of Hermione with Ginny and the flow of your writing style is great.
| Pharies chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
Too cute. Loved Harry being all sage like and whatnot. It was funny.
| Papaya chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
Oh my god.. that was amazing! I adore your writing and your characterizations! :) And.. uh.. HOT!
Also really sweet. Great job!
| Daryl chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
this is above and beyond one of my all time favorite stories in any category
| unthinkable chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Aw.. so so hot and sexy.. wow.
| CheshireRyan chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
| 7RyPtoPh4n chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
wow this story is absolutely amazing ;]
it flowed very nicely with hardly any grammatical errors
basically..i loved it! haha *favs* kudos to u for a job well done
| Dramione-Fan 17 chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
That was amazing and really hot i loved it
| SamanthaKisses chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
Very nicely done! Thanks :)
*squirms in her chair*
| Darkshadow-lord chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Very Nice Story!
| LEDlorien7 chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
I love the way this happens. Ginny didn't mean to kiss her, but then she gave in. It's cool and it makes the situation intense and confusing for everyone! _
I also like the flashback. Well done there.
WHoa, you confused me with this whole extremely perceptive Harry thing. I like it though.
The fact that Hermione's so in awe of the fact that Ginny would choose her says that she likes her. It's the feeling you get when you can't believe how lucky you are. She just doesn't realize that yet.
THis is me being extremely nit-picky, but here: "That one look, lasting mere seconds haunted Hermione the entire match" There should be a comma after "seconds"
More nit-picking: "she pulled on her cloak and headed aback out into the rainy twilight" Aback should be just back.
I really like the way you're characterizing Harry. He's almost better than J.K.R's version. He's protective, perceptive, and he's got the whole enigmatic knowledge thing going on. Pretty cool.
The part after they see Ginny flying, does that happen the same night? Because I had the impression that it was fairly late when they were watching her fly.
Whoa, Hermione, harsh. I hope she's doing that out of protectiveness. And wow, Ginny's awfully bitter. I guess hiding a secret for a long time will do that to a person.
Ooh, hot, angry kisses. Nice. Oh and getting wonderfully steamy.
Haha, silly Neville. Aw, but I like the surprise kiss, that's cute.
“Look, I know you’re my brother’s girlfriend and all, but seeing as how you came on my leg the other night, I was wondering if we could maybe spend some time together?" ... BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Whoa, Ron cheated, and Harry's being mister level-headed reason guy? Crazy. And awesome.
Does she really need an invisibility cloak to go to Hermione's room?
Invisible kisses... that sounds wonderful.
"Watch out for the quiet ones?" That's good, I like it.
I also love "Clothes, off now" and "Don't make me get my wand" made me giggle in my head.
Oh, also, vanilla is possibly one of the most amazing smells in the world.
WOw. Yeah, Ginny, taking charge. And wow again, by the way.
"Ginny gulped, and Hermione Granger, Head Girl of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, began to show Ginny Weasley true magic." This might be one of the best sentences I've ever read in a Ginny/Hermione fanfic.
Oh my god, they are so cute. And hahaha Mrs. Weasley, I love her. THis is an excellent ending to an excellent fic. Amazing. _