Reviews for The Sum is Greater than its Parts
Guest chapter 20 . 8/24
Fantastic ... extraordinary story plot

I'm very sorry for hearing the author losses of his younger daughter ...

Kind regards
Dunno chapter 20 . 6/25
Unsc too op, hated oc character, improve your writing please
JollieHotDog chapter 14 . 6/10
This been a good read at the early chaps but currently the nssc is no more than citadel's b*tch at this point who is more than willing to do anything to please their master
JollieHotDog chapter 1 . 6/10
NSSC* my bad
JollieHotDog chapter 11 . 6/10
Soo... NCCS is citadel's b*tch now? That's dissapointing
oxyd2013 chapter 20 . 6/2
Thank you for your story. The ending with Javik was quite good actually.
Best wishes.
Sierratuere chapter 5 . 5/20
only 32 ais for a fleet of 250 million? Id put it at double or triple that

also why the random capitalisation this is a story lol not a forum post
Sierratuere chapter 2 . 5/20
mein gott you're writing sentences the sizes of paragraphs my eyes
Sierratuere chapter 2 . 5/20
-run on sentences

pain
Enclave Medic Prinz chapter 8 . 5/19
The civilian government was the worst thing to come from this chapter civilians should never have any authority over the military.
Andres DMB chapter 20 . 4/26
Great story, i loved it, i understand your situation, i hope life treats you better, and that this journey was incredible, you did your best, and i thank you for that.
123GOHANZ chapter 20 . 4/16
Damn, I just binge read this entire thing too. A shame to see it cancelled. Oh well. At least I get some closure
MewLover9000 chapter 20 . 4/12
This was a great story. Thank you
ztwillms chapter 20 . 4/13
thank you for all the time and effort you have poured into the story over the last many years! and thank you for calling the story rather than just leaving it open and us wondering.
we appreciate what you've done here for the community.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10
Sorry to hear it
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