Reviews for The Sum is Greater than its Parts
Understand chapter 20 . 4/8/2021
I’m sorry to hear of your loss.
May you be blessed and have peace.
AsynchronousTextureStreaming chapter 20 . 4/9/2021
tbh just post your notes into the last chapter so anyone can see what you had planned
StarDreamer27 chapter 20 . 4/9/2021
Thank you for telling us that you aren’t going to continue this story. Thank you for the story you have written and I wish you the best going forward.
evevee chapter 20 . 4/8/2021
I have followed this story since the first chapter, after so long I had already basically written it off as dead. Unfortunate to have that suspicion confirmed, but at the same time the closure is appreciated. Your reasons for ending this are completely fair, thank you for writing what you did.

GL and TC,
-evevee
chrinschbro213 chapter 20 . 4/8/2021
I have to say at first I thought yay this story updated again and then I saw it was just an authors note but yeah it has been a very long time...
I still remember when I first read this story a few years back and I still love it ;)
But yeah if you lost your drive for this story it is better to let it end then to give it a lackluster ending...
Stay safe and healthy ;)
My thoughts chapter 9 . 4/8/2021
I will be brief.
This is too utopianistic.
Human beings will never be able to operate on a democratic system for long.
People are too easily influenced by those who they are willing to trust based off of image and ideal.
This is an example, by synopsis, of failed society as a whole.
Again here chapter 8 . 4/8/2021
I have read this before, & this happens to be one of the only Halo x Mass Effect stories that I can like.
Considering that, understand, this story tends to be overly ostentatious, in many ways, & up-plays most of the ridiculously convoluted ideas which are far too fantastic, realistically speaking. Fun, but nutty.
Still, I can dig it.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/6/2021
Wrong fic I think I’m tired
Guest chapter 4 . 2/6/2021
You would expect them to have more advanced technology on that ship
Guest chapter 2 . 2/4/2021
The humans would probably be bigger too with advanced technology comes evolution they probably got lifespan of a few thousand years now and like 2-4 meters tall they would be stronger, smarter, and faster
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2021
And hell the mass effect universe probably couldn’t even just reverse engineer the technology they might have a example but they don’t have the math and a lot of other shit they would need to math from the ground up it could take them decades to have a weapon that even works half as good and the Citadel Council only has few hundred planets under it name with maybe a population in the 200 hundred billions
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2021
Mass effect guns wouldn’t even be able to get past a hardlight shield the forerunners could build entire Solar systems ships were probably upwards to 50KM and they probably would have build bigger the had Dyson spheres they had Time dilation technology to build ships at OP speed mass effect wouldn’t stand a fucking chance
Guest chapter 15 . 11/26/2020
trash fanfic too much bullshit
Guest chapter 14 . 11/26/2020
IDIOT idiot idiot
Guest chapter 12 . 11/26/2020
STUPID MOTHERFUCKER
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