Reviews for In the Beginning
Guest chapter 38 . 9/29
Please continue please please continue please i really love this story please
georgia chapter 38 . 5/25
hey love the story and i hope you can still write the wedding scene and possibly a honeymoon type thing keep up the great work
Guest chapter 38 . 4/17
reminder to finish writing the next chapters
MlcgTheGreat chapter 38 . 1/28
This is one of the best "Clexa" fanfics I ever read..it was so funny and realistic..I am excited for the wedding..
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 38 . 12/14/2016
I hope you continue this story! I enjoy is so much! Dominant Lexa and submissive Clarke! I can't wait for the wedding! Maybe they can adopt Aden? And a daughter! And then they can give the daughter the sex talk! Haha! I love this story so so much! The humor is so funny! You definitely have a talent for that! And the Smut is great also! Maybe Raven and her new "girlfriend" can make some new toys?! ;) ;) Haha! Please continue writing it! UPDATE SOON PLEASE! :) ;) - Munro McLaren
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Leapyearbaby29 chapter 36 . 12/14/2016
What's the reasoning behind ERaven? What's so important about it? And I like Lexa's name she came up with. But I can't remember what she said. UPDATE SOON PLEASE! :) ;) - Munro McLaren
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Leapyearbaby29 chapter 34 . 12/14/2016
I kinda saw this coming when Raven was being overly touchy with Abi when Clarke was getting help out of the bathtub and everything! I hope you continue this story! I enjoy is so much! Dominant Kex and submissive Clarke! UPDATE SOON PLEASE! :) ;) - Munro McLaren
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You might not be interested but, I just posted my first Pretty Little Liars & Emison story and I hope you can go check it out! :)
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 32 . 12/14/2016
Wait what did Clarke win? And I really hope you make a chapter where Lexa asks Clarke to pleasure herself why she watches! Haha! And Clarke is all blushing and flustered and embarrassed and shy and Lexa is all teasing and confident and everything! Haha! ;) UPDATE SOON PLEASE! :) ;) - Munro McLaren
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I hope you consider this! :)
You might not be interested but, I just posted my first Pretty Little Liars & Emison story and I hope you can go check it out! :)
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 31 . 12/14/2016
Aw man! I was really hoping for a Clexa pregnancy! And Clarke carrying the baby! Maybe you can consider it! And maybe you can have Lexa ask Clarke to pleasure herself and Clarke gets all flustered and shy and blushing and it's adorable and cute. And maybe Raven uses her technology skills and finds an erotic movie! Haha! Why were they banned?
I love this! And why don't the Ground People have modern things or know what modern things are? I mean the ALIE girl, the real Alie was the first commander wasn't she? So why didn't she teach the Grounders what she knew? Are the Grounders all the people who survived the Earth like blowing up? And what about the Mountain Men? What was the point of taking Grounders and using their blood? For what? Sorry for the questions! UPDATE SOON PLEASE! :) ;) -Munro McLaren
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Leapyearbaby29 chapter 29 . 12/14/2016
I loved this. Jeez after being told like three times that Lexa LOVES Clarke, Abby is finally believing it and accepting it! Finally! I love the relationship Lexa is building with Octavia and Raven! If only this happened on the show! UPDATE SOON PLEASE! :) ;) - Munro McLaren
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Leapyearbaby29 chapter 28 . 12/14/2016
Oh my god! This is my most favorite chapter right now! I love Octavia and Raven and how they tease Clarke! I could not stop laughing while I read this! Keep up the great work and keep making it funny! UPDATE SOON PLEASE! :) ;) - Munro McLaren
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And for last chapter, oh my god! Octavia and Raven running and and seeing a naked Lexa straddling a naked Clarke! Priceless! Haha!
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 27 . 12/14/2016
Why was Clarke in the ground? What happened to her cot? And what did you mean by Lexa brought her knee around? And how did Abby not hear Lexa yelling? How did Indra not hear the yelling? UPDATE SOON PLEASE! :) ;) - Munro McLaren
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Leapyearbaby29 chapter 26 . 12/14/2016
What exactly was the position they were in at the end? Like how were they positioned? And thank god Abby didn't walk in! Haha! I can wait for Lexa to use the strap on! Dominant Lexa and submissive Clarke! And when did Clarke rip her stitches? It wasn't last chapter was it? Did she rip the before last chapter? UPDATE SOON PLEASE! :) ;) - Munro McLaren
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Leapyearbaby29 chapter 24 . 12/14/2016
When did Raven hid the sex toy under Clarke's cot in the infirmary?! And wouldn't the doctors be able to see it? And why aren't they called doctors? Can't they make medical tools that were modern before the earth become dead? UPDATE SOON PLEASE! :) ;) - Munro McLaren
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Why did terrorists blow up the world?
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 23 . 12/14/2016
For the last chapter, did it actually become quiet in the battle field or was that a figure of speech? And oh my god! Abby seriously needs to have a bell hung on her to announce her presence! Haha! I can seriously imagine Octavia having to try on the harness. Was the strap on attach to the harness when she tried it on? Abd then when she face planted onto the bed! Where was Raven? Was she still there? And I can see Lexa being a very dominant person and Clarke a very submissive person! UPDATE SOON PLEASE! :) ;) - Munro McLaren
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