That is... So fucked up and hardly what I would call playing something for laughs... Ick.

On what planet is 35'c mild?

Awe I wanted to read more. Love this story!

This is so true! I've never been able to put it into words. Well done!

wow naruto treating hisana like this for sakura who never gave him the time of day

good thing i dont read reviews

WOOOO GAAARA LETS GOOO. FINALLY GAARA! I DONT CARE IF HE ONLY SHOWS UP FOR ONE CHAPTER! I AM SATISFIED!

It's nice to see how Hisana impacts the other characters, but we don't really see how she is impacted from it.

She cried for an hour for having suddenly lost her whole family and friends, and that's it. We don't know how she is adapting to being in a new place, being taught to kill, or even fighting. I did boxing for a couple of years and can still remember how my heart was pounding in every spar and at my first match I was positively a mess of emotions, tension and excitement.

Here Hisana learns for two weeks about stances and uses the excuse of muscle memory to explain how she has beaten a clan kid specialised in taijitsu who has been training and sparring for years. What is she a prodigy?

I'm not understanding, why is she training up team 7? she already knows it turns out alright, and should be preparing herself for future events. she dosent have the plot armor Naruto or Sasuke have

The last sentence killed me. I’m going to like this

Itacho would NOT kill Shisuis little sister.

I'm reading this again and in Chapter 4, I get so aggravated with Hisana's acceptance of a bunch of seven year old girls drooling like thirsty bitches for another seven year old kid. Japan has weird standards and no wonder it has lots of cases of stalking and pedophilia. I dislike Hinata, Sakura and Ino a lot. And, the fact that they still got their objects (yes, objects) of obsession in the end is unsettling. Especially Yamanaka Ino marrying that Sasuke substitute. Yikes. It's like giving the local perverts their victims as gifts. Granted, adult Sasuke just used Sakura as a baby making machine while Naruto-baka has no backbone against his "precious" people. Urgh. Naruto grew up conditioned to try his best to please people. I always speculate that if the manga was more hardcore, it'll show just how fcked up Naruto in his childhood. Him tolerating and being happy with sexual assault towards himself bcoz of a praise, a pat on the head and free ramen is just vomit-inducing and something psychology and logic dictates can be true in his case. He was so attention starved, he'll do anything for positive recognition. Yikes.

A nine year old uchiha wouldn’t be weak, they would probably be stronger than an average adult woman.

So writer, did you forget about awakening the sharingan?

Loved it. Great job with the characters. Loved them. Though I did keep mixing up the genin also you threw in nicknames and name changes like crazy without context so a little help would be appreciated. Cant wait for next time! Also team Kakashi for ship