Reviews for The Black Phoenix
Lunasama123 chapter 4 . 8/12/2017
Its been 2 years
Stormdragon6783 chapter 4 . 7/12/2017
This is a great story, hope you return to it.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/28/2017
It been 4 months
TheAnimeKing892 chapter 2 . 1/20/2017
honestly would grayfia or akeno would i pick for your poll
fenixrojo36 chapter 4 . 9/18/2016
insanemaelstorm chapter 3 . 7/6/2016
Great chapter. Like the story a lot. Especially like the fact that everything is not perfect. Like riser hates him and he has attempts on his life. Also liked how the relationships are developing. Please update soon. Can't wait to read more
arckane chapter 4 . 6/28/2016
you lied its been like 7 months and still no chapter you liar
Dragoncyber22 chapter 4 . 6/26/2016
continues the story
Dragoncyber22 chapter 3 . 5/27/2016
continues the story
jesus.rubio.9028 chapter 4 . 3/24/2016
When the next one coming
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 2/4/2016
nice job
Korog the Oversoul chapter 3 . 1/12/2016
Okay so 9 or 10 goddesses are interested in Naruto? This will be interesting.
Korog the Oversoul chapter 2 . 1/12/2016
I'm just going to come out and say this as clearly and bluntly as I can, as a 17 year old Riser is angered by Naruto getting positive attention from the Gremorys and is thinking about marrying Rias, I dub Riser a pedophile. Next I believe that they should shift the contract to Rias and Naruto as that actually has a decent chance at working. I hope you update soon I can hardly wait for more.
Korog the Oversoul chapter 1 . 1/12/2016
That was Ameterasu wasn't it? I think that you should pit Naruto against Riser for Rias (although Naruto would be fighting to give Rias her freedom). Also I think giving Naruto the Kusanagi sword and Totsuka blade for Naruto to have more than magic in his wheelhouse. Also Naruto as a training maniac on the level of Sairog Bael is always a nice way to keep Naruto as Naruto. As for his peerage I recommend Hiei from Yu Yu Hakusho as any of the following Bishop, Rook, Knight, or mutation pawn, Kirito, Asuna, Strea, Sinon, Leafa, Phillia, Sillica, Lisbeth, Yuki, Rain, Seven, Sumaragi, Yui, Klien, Agil, and/or Heathcliff from SAO as any pieces but no Asuna in the harem, Drizzt Do'Urden from D&D Forgotten Realms would be an interesting possibility but that would be too convoluted. Um Ulquiorra Cifer from Bleach as a rook would rock... I am unsure if the Narutoverse is open for picking because if so Sasuke as a knight, Hinata as a rook and into the harem, Sakura as a bishop, Neji as a mutation pawn, Lee rook or pawn, I kind of wish he had those 6 fairy pieces but like 8 of each and all mutation, that way he could get Minato, Kushina, and tons of other powerhouses. Anyway can't wait for more.
KuroAsezino chapter 4 . 11/22/2015
Hope you update it
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