Reviews for Daring to Want
Heartonsleeve22 chapter 1 . 8/6/2019
Loved it
Rae Smith Cobleigh chapter 1 . 6/8/2019
Well, that was lovely. Your author’s note made me smile: the “Caine is a man of few words” coming in direct contrast to how you were bemoaning the length of your story. It felt like it was just the right length; you don’t need to apologize. Nice insight into his psyche, and how he’s had to disconnect his mouth from his emotions and his emotions from himself, just to survive. The idea that Jupiter is reconnecting his broken pieces is a beautiful one. I look forward to how Jupiter starts to try to wield her influence to make the universe a better place, seeing how she’s succeeded with him. There’s a loooong story there, filled with political intrigue, spiritual growth, and massive amounts of socioeconomic machinations. But thanks for this lovely, insightful beginning. :)
angel897 chapter 1 . 8/22/2018
awesome story loved it, great job
Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2018
I live for this! I love this story! Write more!
PrayerGirl chapter 1 . 1/15/2018
Awwww! This was very sweet and you did well with Cain and his thoughts!
ladeerelli chapter 1 . 8/2/2016
Cool story.
KatieMouse09 chapter 1 . 5/18/2016
You captured the characters and their traits beautifully. Such a sweet portrayal
pjfrsf chapter 1 . 4/2/2016
AMAZING! I just love the way you write. You have added such depth to these characters and written them exactly how I envisioned they would be with each other. Please write more. This story needs your talent to finally make it what we all knew it was trying to be. Sadly I doubt there will be another film, but the story deserves the great middle and ending that we will never see...
The-Red-Lip chapter 1 . 3/22/2016
Love it!
This story is cheeseballs!
I'm ts amazing
AngelesPG chapter 1 . 1/17/2016
I am charmed with it since you describe his relation, thank you for this ones shot, please he continues writing on this pair, thank you
ash chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
very good. it seemed very natural and well written
Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
I really liked this!
arkyytior chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
Amazing story. Very very well done!
cytpotter chapter 1 . 10/28/2015
:D Great! Loved it! Great job! Thanks for sharing!
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