Prostitute Alice should stop obsessing over Edward and his love life. Isn't Jasper doing his fucking job

The interfering annoying manipulative cunt Alice can go fuck herself

Still here, many years after you wrote this, but this is worth the wait! Thanks, Beth!

This is a beautiful story. Please don’t apologize for the late posting (even though this is years after you wrote it). Youu have other priorities, not the least of which is providing for yourself and your family. We are blessed that you have shared your talent with those of us reading1

Brilliantly well written
Had me in tears a few times
Can’t wait to hear the rest x

I had to read all of this today, I didn't want to stop! And now I can't wait for an update :)

Patiently waiting for the next chapter when you get around to it.

I'm not a crier, but this story has had me bawling in places.

I know it’s been a few years but I’ve noticed you making the effort when you can :) can’t wait to see when you surprise with the next chapter

Still One of my favourites.

Too much Jacob in this story

Oh my god!
I have no words for this fanfic. I’m so in love for this and I can’t believe there is no more chapter :(
Hi, I’m for Brasil, that’s why my English is sucks, haha
But seriously, PLEASEEEE continue this story!
I don’t know what happened in your life, and I see the history is no updates for 2 years, but I have faith that you will continue this, pleaseeee
I have to know what is going to happening, is the volturi coming for the cullens? Bella and Edward is going to have sex? Bella will be pregnant? (By the way I will love if that happen)
So, is this, I’m waiting your answer ️
Beijos do Brasil (kisses for Brasil)

So... of course I'm sad that this is where it is left and there hasn't been an update for a couple years. This is such a beautiful, heartwrenching and glorious tale so far and I'm so very eager to see where you plan to take these characters. I love the vampire's dynamics, their bond, their personalities. They're so... real. Without the coddling & condescending explanations of why they do or say certain things or act a certain way. As an author should, you explain it in their dialogue, their actions, Bella's realizations... with subtlety. Ironically, it helps the visualization of these characters solidify in a much more realistic manner. I'm sad to see that there may be a significant wait here to get the rest of this story.

I also know, having been in this fandom since 2008, and having struggled during these 14 years to write my own stories (good God, I have SO many screaming to be posted), how the inspiration and availability of time ebbs and flows around the life we live and lead that demands our attention. So, I will just say that... if you ever need an ear, eye, or red pen, I'm here. I'm happily available most of the time, either here or on FB with same name, JoVersify.

Thank you for sharing your beautiful creations with us and I hope, I hope, I hope that we'll be seeing you again very soon!

Eternally grateful for this joy,
~Jo

My face is wet with countless tears. My eyes are blurry writing this.

I have no f***ing idea how you managed to write this chapter. None. That was so painful. Beautifully done, but... sweet mercy, not going back there.

Sigh.

I haven't been reviewing because I'm a selfish, greedy prick consuming stories like a black hole... but this chapter moved me so deeply.

The story of the girl in the woods and Bella's assurances of what happened to her. Her explanation of the only love for humans that we don't need to question or guess at.

That was fucking poetry. Brilliant.

You are a brilliant writer... never guess about that.

Thank you for this story. (And your other one that I also devoured with fervor and did not review because again, I am a prick.)
~Jo

Just found this story, I couldn’t put it down. I will patiently wait for the next update. I know other people have been waiting longer but I’m so glad I found this story.