Reviews for Unity |
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![]() ![]() Thanks for a great story! loved this take on the marriage law |
![]() ![]() ![]() A lovely start. I look forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved this! Couldnt stop reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story. Well written. Every single part is wonderful. Loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the details you writeand I would very much like to see a visual of their rings and clothing please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful well written story! One of my favorite 8 year/marriage law stories! Only complaint is I wish there was more Hermione/Narcissa interactions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is stupid. writer has a hard on for bending over backwards for man bitches |
![]() ![]() ![]() who would want to read a story where people are constantly rude to hermione? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a cute story, but it's getting too adolescent American sounding for my taste. "Don't front about it" sounds like a rapper in 2012. I just can't imagine it in a posh English accent in 1998. |
![]() ![]() ![]() absolutely delicious story! thank you a lot for writing it and sharing! Ive loved the first half till they got married, it was wild :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an awesome story. Thank you for writing it. I loved it so much. You are a amazing writer. I can't wait to read more from you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a compelling story to read! Very talented writing. |
![]() ![]() I think this is absolutely in character for Hermione at her age and after she said she just wanted to be a normal teenager...well there you have it. This fits. lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() DOBBYS ALIVE OMG I MISSED YOU DOBBY |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just finished reading this story (again) because out of the blue, the scene where the 4 couples are planning their wedding dates to promote the marriage law, popped into my head. After all these years your story lives in my brain! I loved it as much as I did the first time I read it. Thank you so much for sharing your work with us! |