Reviews for Immaculate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please please keep on writing, this story is excellent, it's like a c.l. stone book already! |
![]() ![]() Another cause for missing ur period is weight lose or gain, more commonly lose. It doesn't mean that Sang is necessarily pregnant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it, this could make a really good (in a bizarre way) story. She could so make all the guys nuts trying to keep this secret from them. You will have to be careful if you continue since we all know how sensitive Sang is. It would not do for the guys to find out that she thinks she is pregnant and laugh. It would be a good way to introduce the subject of birth control then let her discover the joys of sex with her boys... That could be an awesome story and one I have been hoping someone would write. How Sang will decide to have sex and who will be her first? |
![]() ![]() I don't think these chapters turned out the way you thought they did |
![]() ![]() Ermm I'm confused lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very much enjoying your story thus far. Thanks for the entertaining read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really really liked this. It's a great story and I hope you keep going and post more stories about Sang and the boys! It is so well-written! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job with the POV for both Dr. Green and Mr. Blackbourne. They sounded exactly as they should have. I really really like this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. This is really really good. Like. Really. I could be reading C.L. Stone- you've nailed her tone of voice. I'm only on chapter 2 and I'm going to be completely bummed if I get to chapter 6 and it ends in a cliff-hanger, or the story isn't finished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good, and it makes a lot of sense given Sang's background! Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this and your style of writing. Please continue this . Please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am really liking the story. Please continue writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story so far, please keep updating. Just... You said it be North, Nathan, Luke or Gabriel, and it couldn't be Victor or Kota. Silas feels left out. It's just something stupid I noticed. I love the story. Please, keep writing! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing skills are incredible, really. You've done better than most sticking to the minor details yet adding an additional piece to the plot. Just to let you know for future references, in America the term is "she is in the washroom" not toilets. With the acception of that minor detail, you were good at using American terms. I really enjoy the story so I do hope that you continue writing. You were also very good at sticking to the 1st person perspective. You are better than most authors at writing so even if you choose not to finish this story you should continue with others. I hope I can help if you need anything however if you don't mind my asking, how old are you? I just want to know because your writing skills and vocabulary are exceptionally good. I'm not sure if you can respond to this on fanfiction however if not, please contact me at . |