|Reviews for Redemption|
| mieudiary chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
Ooooh shit is going doooooowwwnnnnnnnnnn
So hot omg HNNGHNGHN Arthur why u no realize you was so excited wanting to frick Gil more than a lady lelellele _(XDDDDDJL)_ This is just so perfect huhuhuhuh
| Person chapter 2 . 3/29/2015
Came here from mieu... I have no words... This is just awesome! Your portrayals of Gilbert and Arthur- especially Gilbert-are just so spot-on and riveting! Your story manages to give off the old-timey vibes well, and it all just flows so elegantly! And the EngPru! Can't forget about the beauty of EngPru! Of course, I hope that you never get discouraged from the lack of reviews. It's clearly just because EngPru is a rarepair. Your writing style deserves more reviews! ... So I guess I did have words after all, but I feel as if they're inadequate. I really love this story so far. Words don't do my love justice. May you live long, update soon, and prosper in all of your endeavors!
| mieudiary chapter 2 . 3/22/2015
I'm loving this ...so much-I have been in this too deep, I can't get out-/q/)
This is so good, I really like the little wicked details here there, characteristic actions. How Artie buck his hip when Gil on top of him, how Gil could still keep his calm and sarcasm after being messed up by the pirate's kiss -I totally love that, I never like how ppl portray uke being 100% uke lelelelelel
And how Gil respond to the clothing store's owner, that's really good and wicked. Arthur is totally a turn on/slapped ok no
there was a very very very small detail that was after mentioning Gilbert's neck was going to leave bruised after the strangle. It wasn't noticed for the rest of the day, like getting in the clothes store while waiting for Arthur, Gil could notice the bruise on the mirror inside that shop, or whatever whatever. Since it went unmentioned,it seemed like the bruise was just vanished hahahahaha but that was just a tiny little small detail, it's okay to be missed out q)bbbbb
I wonder if one day Gil threaten to crush Artie's nut balls that'd be very amusing /slapped again
| mieudiary chapter 1 . 3/21/2015
Hoooooo yes review, I never good in writing review but yes
I love the concept a lot, the story promised a lot of angsty and sexual tension, definitely my most fav of the night plus Pirate x Priest EngPru HNNNGHNGHN
You have a really nice writing style, it's almost like I'm reading a novel and I like it very much.
there is a small flaw there where you changed the point view/scene/time in the paragraph, for example where you change from the judgement scene to the priest first introduction scene. Perhaps there should be a time sentence cut it apart or a "-" u know, a line across so that we know the scene has changed. Cuz at first I thought Arthur saw Gil at that moment I was so confused ahaha. Also where from that introduction scene to the day the Pirate arrived scene, I thought it was the same day;;;;;; or is it? ummmm yea so there is that
I like how you portrayed Arthur and Gilbert so far, Gil's hidden personality yesssssssss. I also like how you isolate them and Arthur's sadism on wanting to sacrifice Gil for his own sake. /coughsplztorturegilmorecoughs/ REally curious how the story would go gaaaaaaaaa _(:3JL)_
Now I'm really curious what if Artie has to go to the washroom when he being cuffed on the bed at night like that lolololololololol
| 00Fangirl chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
I absolutely adore this! I'm not usually a PrUK girl but the summary drew me in and I'm glad it did! I love everything about it, except the way the mean priests treat my baby Gilbert! I feel like those books are going to get him in even bigger trouble with the church. The end was absolutely perfect! Great job! Can't wait for more!
| AwkwardAidyn chapter 1 . 3/6/2015
God please update this! It's so cute! I love it! I will follow faithfully to the end of this story!