What's the point of reading this, there is no next chapter. What a waste of my time to read. Don't bother.

Hey I guess this story is unlikely to receive another chapter but I still thought I should review and commend you on it.

It really is a good story, easy to read and free of errors. I like how your Harry has his faults and is not just some perfect, (literally) magical good boy whom everyone adores. He has a temper, he gets impatient and he at least used to have a bit of a wild streak with his sneaking about.

I also enjoyed you, perhaps expectedly given the premise, putting more emphasis on magic and how it hides in the shadowed corners of the world under the noses of those who fear it and would rather stamp it out.

You are also really good at characterization and making even the most minor character feel distinct and like they matter. But ofc I won't lie besides Harry himself I was mostly keeping my eye on Aeryn and Margeary, I had hoped (hope! :P ) they would find some modus vivendi so Harry can have both in his bed, ideally at the same time ;)

Anyway followed so if you ever update this you will have one eager reader. And good luck with whatever you choose to do in the future and thanks for a good read.

Oh man, this was an excellent story! I sincerely hope you return to finish it one day.

Damn, good on ya, lad...

Should have just killed the prick...

Damn, that's a helluva opening chapter. You've managed to make me despise Robert in only one chapter, well done.

Horrible chapter should have just killed the girl, I already ddnt want him with her but I really hope he's not gonna be now.

It's a pity that it's abandoned but definitely worth the read

dammit just when a well written story starts to get good its abandoned by the author.

Do you give writing lessons? Cuz I sure AF would sign up ASAP.

I have read hundreds of HP crossovers with LOTR, Naruto, Justice League, Marvel, and more - I don't think I have ever come across a fic that was able to HANDLE the tones of both universes with more elegance than you have. Most such crossovers are cheap BAMF HP fics with degenerate Harem pairings.
It makes a bit sad that this isn't continuing and appears abandoned, but I still consider myself lucky to have read it.

I read this story a while back and I have to say your fic was amongst one of the 10 that motivated me to start writing although I don't think I am anywhere near your level. The best damned crossover fic I have ever read.

Thank you so much for it and have a great day ahead friend! 3

I started reading this knowing it was never going to be updated again, and that makes it more bittersweet than anything. It’s like a work of art left half finished. You can appreciate the beauty that is there, but are left wondering of what could be. If you see this, thank you for writing such a wonderful piece.

Come on man I need another chapter

What a fuckin wimp. Let his father whip him. The action is done by the man holding the tool He really is a stupid child if he thinks its on him. smh

love the story so far, update soon ;)

I never write reviews. But this deserved one - the most beautiful ffnet prose I have had the pleasure of reading. Looking forward to reading this