Reviews for The Black Prince
Zedicus101 chapter 2 . 3/8/2015
More magic than before, awesome! I kinda hope the rape event won't happen this time, but it was what made Aeryn more fanatic.. Who knows, keep it up! :D
inawarminister chapter 1 . 3/8/2015
A rewrite? Heh, looking forward to the later bits.

Hmm, Harrold is a much nicer, much more royal, much more Westerosi than Harry. Approved. If only other period fics had this, too.

The travel between Kingswood and the Red Keep is much better, we get the sense of farness instead of scene jump as it was in the original.

Hmm, Robert's actions regarding Pete is much better here, no need for him to beat Pete when he still can convince Harrold, after all.
ficreader2011 chapter 2 . 3/8/2015
hope harry actually uses his magic this this great fic s/11035559/1/Harry-Potter-and-the-Seven-Kingdoms
ww1990ww chapter 2 . 3/8/2015
I wonder will Harry go like in original to being teached under Tywin or maybe somwhere else.
beatshield chapter 2 . 3/8/2015
Story is amazing so far keep it up
Mercy Of Baal chapter 2 . 3/7/2015
Ooh awesome. More intricate but still the Same feel to it. The interaction changed a little. I think I have read your story too many times because I could read them lol. I really really liked the rewrite.
I was dissapointed I didn't get to see Jamie bang his sword when Harry was practicing. I thought it was kind of iconic to your story.
Him walking through the city and seeing a bit more was cool. eew though. Last time you explained the smell. But now it's really filthy huh.
Can't wait to read more!
irdgad chapter 2 . 3/7/2015
I hope to see Harry use his magic a little more this time around. While he might not be able to use powerful spells due to his lack of a wand, minor magics should be able to impress most people, especially if used with subtlety.

A mention of their secrets, an actual chill wind when they irritate him, a slight glow in his eyes, the flames in the candles rising higher or dancing unnaturally, etc should be able to give him an air of mystery. A Harry Potter story without much magic, however wonderfully you write it (which you most certainly do) fells a little... less.

Looking forward to more.

ww1990ww chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
Hmm so this a rewrite yes? Hard to tell is this was anything difrent then original but it's nice to read again good story.
Uchiha Salad chapter 2 . 3/7/2015
Well this is sure to be interesting. I've read "The Prince Who Was Promised" and I can see the subtle but great differences between the two worlds. With this Harry being more aware of his powers, his previous life, and his attempts to try and find a way to harness it (unlike in the previous version). I can't wait to see what else changes with these changes.
alrightpanda chapter 2 . 3/7/2015
Is this gonna be the same story and just re-edited or are there gonna be changes to the story further along the chapters?

If it is the former, you should put an A.N. on the other story when this one catches up so people following that get a heads up.

Also could you be a little clearer about their ages this time around? In the first chapter Harry is a boy of ten, later he is 9. Aeryn is a year younger than a 14 year old boy, later when *spoiler* happened she was 10.
Merovich chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
Oh a rewrite? Glad this story is continuing.
Japanime123 chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
Glad to see you writing this story again, I cannot wait until you reach the later chapters. Though, I am curious as to what changes you have made now that you have read the books.
Eberhardt chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
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