How could those kids be so stupid…

I'm scared that something will happen to Aeryn…

I *believe* this is an error, but I'm not quite sure.

“Heard if from your father”, I believe 'if' is meant to be 'it'.

Great chapter once again!

There's another error, I believe. In the second paragraph, it cuts off at “Still, he fought on.a”.

Woah. I just have to say, this first chapter alone probably has the best prose I've ever seen on this site.

There was, however, one glaring mistake, and that's when Cersei says “I warned you against defyinh”.

Other than that, this story is perfect so far, thank you!

please we need moore

Incredible story, especially when you made it apparent Harry isn't invincible. But you've already written yourself jnto a hole: there is no central goal, no burning passion that Harry has to work and chafe for. You have put essentially a god into the middle ages. He is a well adjusted, mind-reading, telekinetic wizard. And this is before he has a wand. Really if you put a kid in Harry's birth and station, but only the advanced mental faculties and development-not the wizard powers. Then you would already have an absurdly above the curve royaling with near unlimited prospects. Now you have an absurdly above the curve royaling with unlimited power.

I really hope that you will continue this story one day. This is one of my favorite stories in this site. And I was really liking where this story was going. Hope you are alright and in good health.

I don't really get why people are mad about your portrayal of harry because from what I can tell your harry is one of the most accurate out of all the fics I've read don't know why but for some reason people keep making harry into a snarky loud confident smartass even tho he was never like that he was always doubting himself and he was never overly confident and he was pretty solemn in the books too hell he had a mental breakdown when sirious died and I really like the dialogues between your characters it fits the middle ages setting of game of thrones and at first I didn't get why you would make aeryn get raped but then further reading I realized you used as character development and used it to impact the readers overall one of the greatest fics I have ever had the pleasure of reading I hope you change your mind and pick this series up again I really loved it

I really wish you ignore the mean reviews and keep going at this story it seems that you were taking this story in a neat direction I'll still keep visiting here just to hope for a new chapter

Quite the interesting story. Sadly it was dropped shortly after things were started to pick up.

Cersei would undoubtedly love a trueborn. There is no reason to remove her single decent attribute just because you (understandably) hate the character, that's just poor writing.

Okay, this beginning is fine, just a small (monumental) problem, something of perspective really, I hate Cersei with passion, the question will be, will I despair with the following chapters or will I resist until the child realizes the nature of the whore?

I really hope you ignore the non constructive criticism people post and continue this story cause I really like where this story is going although I would like to say that harry doesn't seem to be growing personality wise so I hope he will grow more as a person cause I didn't feel like he changed personality wise since the first chapter but all in all I really like this story and hope you continue this

It would be better if he has a moniker Harrold the Defiant lmao