Reviews for Mass Effect: End of Days
The Prime Cronos chapter 11 . 9/14
This must be the second or third read through and i Hope i have Not yet reviewed in this chapter.
The portrail of the asari bugs me mightily!
When you live as long and "peacful" as asari they would be more Like elves from middle earth Not like demented geesers from the church. They would be masters of politics in the Long Game. Not emotionally uncontrolled, Like Atheta's opponent.
I would picture this more of a Well planned meeting, where essentially the "younger matriachs" would father votes and overthrow the faction clinging to the lost surpramicy granted by the beacon. And If they don't want to fallow its advice maybe this faction is indoctrinated now or hast been over the Last hundred years.
With the time, age and Power they would Look all different outcomes profits and consequences that a Meeting where a single asari wants to persuade Others in the floor, seems laughable.
Sorry For this critisism, still Love the rest of the story
amerikhan786 chapter 9 . 6/12
Fic makes no sense, they won a War against a race that was inspired by Prototype and the Flood and hundreds of Years later they would lose against the Council? They have Anti Matter reactors and Energy Weapons, can build Dyson Swarms and have an Industry that Dwarves everything in the Mass Effect Universe yet they are somehow having trouble with Batarian Pirates lmao. Fic was going great until half through it you decide to limit Humanity for no other reason then to stick to Canon as much as possible. Lost potential to a great Story.
DarkChampion chapter 9 . 5/18
Frank...thats embarrassing
Amaraldane chapter 20 . 1/9
It's been almost 1.5 years. Hope you're OK.
E chapter 9 . 12/7/2022
Bring back Coats

This is an order.

Failure will not be tolerated on this team!
whytf chapter 20 . 11/22/2022
Bro, it's been over a year bro, come back
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2022
Hope you continue
valkrus chapter 20 . 10/27/2022
where are you? Where are the updates? please don't let this die I'm finding less and less acceptable ME fics as days pass
Guest chapter 9 . 10/20/2022
ffs! mass effect tech is less then worthless to humans
Coment9 chapter 8 . 10/19/2022
Bookmark number one
Escritor rarito chapter 20 . 9/21/2022
Los transhumanos son un grupo de psicoptas que quieren ser cyborg por un extraño fetiche con las maquinas, una sociedad humana asi ya ni siquiera son humanos, di la alianza ciborg o algo asi.
Despues del capitulo de bombardear a los cosechadores se fue a la mierda con personajes que hablan sobre naves estrañas, gente aciendo cosas en la oscuridad , con nombres que nadie conose sin historia, todo se volvio demaciado vago intentando ser misterioso sobre los segadores que es ridiculo, no necesitas ser misterioso, solo escribe el barco segador, las ordenes del segador, los reclutas del segador,etc no esa mierda de misterio de algo que todos saben, no sacaras un enemigo desconocido del sombrero... todos saben que son los segadores no hace falta el misterio para los lectores, queda mal por que no hay sorpresa alguna.
Adam Jensen-AugmentedTF29Agent chapter 20 . 8/26/2022
I wonder what happens next? Also wonder if we'll get A.I. with whatever BCI succeeds irl.
Arashi Uzukaze chapter 20 . 8/21/2022
This is all good. But a suggestion is to drastically reduce the amount of scene switching. It was slowing down the plot too much with irrelevant PoVs.
Buddy dude chapter 7 . 7/26/2022
friend I know it's late but you should watch this video, T6GUHyRBgOQ(paste the dashes) it will give you a better understanding of scale and how many stars and planets humanity has
Aetherium21 chapter 13 . 6/8/2022
Ahaha winning the geth over further one nacho at a time
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