Reviews for Robotech: The Ashes of Empire
Anon chapter 1 . 5/11/2017
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. A little disappointed that the obliteration of the Invid by the Zentraedi warship cannons was not actually written.
WHCnelson chapter 1 . 10/24/2015
Guest chapter 2 . 3/12/2015
Wow! Again. Love the story. Here's some minor needs/questions. I am setting them up so that a search can find the wording in question.
Needs a "the"- " [the] prostrate Tirolian."
Nedds another word for clarity - "...Darius was not privileged to[hear/receive/?] while squadrons of Gnerls filled the morning sky above in a near constant roar.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2015
gVt, wow! You're a great story teller. I was enthralled!
There are a couple of typos: wit should be with, layer should be lair. There is an uncommon or misuse of a term in the 1st half, but I can not remember it. Maybe some one else will recognize it.

Without page numbers there is no easy way to find the correct para/sentence/line. I was too busy enjoying to note locations. Sorry! :-)