Nicely done! Thanks for sharing your incarnation of JKR's world.

Favoriting.

A super original and very fun story! So many lives ruined by Dumbledore and without Harry it all crumpled. I loved your view of the magical world in Spain!

Awesome! Thanks!

Fabulous! I love seeing the guilty brought to justice! Thanks for writing!

As horrible as Cedric's injuries are, your version is a more realistic portrayal of such a deadly competition. And I love sporty Hermione. I wish I could see her new hairdo. Thanks for writing!

I'm glad Ron is going to get a taste of his own medicine, but I'm angry at all the Gryffindors, and they deserve more than just coming in last for the house cup. I'm anxious to see what happens when Harry and Sirius pull all their investments put of Britain. Thanks for writing!

Yes, I wondered about Scanners not being identified by the house elves, but that is just one of the scores of plot holes. I love fan fiction because the holes often get filled. Thanks for writing!

This was nice. Wrapped up a lot of loose ends and such. Filled in some areas that could be interesting. I'm happy for Cedric getting a happy ending and Luna moving and pursuing a dream job.

I really liked this.

im done..

you can skip most of this chap.

if a video has nothing to do with a song.
the vid is filled with subliminal messages

what does harry and hermione playn sports have anything to do with tour plot.
you can skip all that nonsence, and not miss anything .
its pointless and only serves to pad your fic with useless paragraghs

what pussy.

they probably did notice and may have even told Dumbledore but as we know house elf's can't act without an order