Reviews for Hermione's Brilliant Idea |
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Guest chapter 10 . 3/25 SPAM! SPAM! SPAM! SPAM! SPAMMITY SPAM! |
BarbedCaress chapter 6 . 3/7 I find it interesting Rita was bold enough to call the goblins incompetent. Would be fun to see what happens to her the next time she enters the bank. :) |
BarbedCaress chapter 3 . 3/6 6th degree burns? Seriously... If a limb is burned to the bone and all that is left of the flesh is char and ashes... THAT is only a 4th degree burn. . So unless the dragon fire burned his soul or something other than his body... There is no 5th or higher degree of burn. . Although the thought of something being able to burn the soul is interesting. Like a Dementor's Kiss, but without the snogging... |
BarbedCaress chapter 2 . 3/6 5th degree burns? Really? |
mithrilandtj chapter 6 . 2/25 why cant harry wear a condom for the ritual? |
Kazuki King chapter 7 . 2/19 ... it's Merry Christmas and Happy Yule. |
Kazuki King chapter 4 . 2/19 Why was my first thought after the 4th paragraph was,"Nobody expects a Spanish Inquisition!" meme in the form the trio of house elves in their attire blasting through the door? I am laughing out loud tbh. |
Guest chapter 5 . 1/27 Harry is a bit of an angsty little bitch in this. Sorry but it's weird this whole trust thing, unless it's one of those "DumbleAss planted MoRon & there were potion plans involved, so rethink everything" stories. We're literally overlooking the COS year when Ron stuck by him during the heir of slytherin fiasco..not to mention following harry into a nest of gigantic spiders, who MoRon has a great fear of...not to mention is was Ron's sister who was being possessed & Ron didn't hesitate to go into the chamber...not to mention that ron risked his mother's wrath, his father's job to go with the twins to rescue harry from the dursleys... ALL of that happened in just one year involving harry and one the supporting characters. But he's always "betrayed"? I don't mind a MoRon bashing story where harry and hermione break away but how parched can one be, in that kind of set up, with fantasy works that are made by fans? |
HetaPhiPuffPrincess chapter 2 . 1/23 Oh God i hate when people pit the twins agaisnt Harry, like thats the most unbelievable aspect of any fic. Like Rob and Ginny being horrid def believable but the twins or remus or sirius agaisnt harry and u have lsot the plot . Idk if ill finish but im a try. Ok swriously stop writing, ur clealry a lazy writer . Cuz im only half way through this chapter and all i can think is that despite the brillance of Harrys speech . That was the dumbest conflict , matter fact there was no conflict. There was Harry shouting and then him invoking a vow or oath and not finishing it all to leave and pop inside the castle as if the Headmaster couldnt find them? What? |
HetaPhiPuffPrincess chapter 1 . 1/23 Ok i get it jow ur just speeding through . Its not about storyline just the plot. And thats cool I guess , its jsut ur running at 100 mph with how quickly everything happens. |
HetaPhiPuffPrincess chapter 1 . 1/23 Ok i want u to know this is adorable but totally improbable. The idea that the two most aocial awkward students of Hogwarts would just miraculously in the span of 24hrs go from just best friends to anogging by the black lake is absurd but im here for it. Its just a rather quickly paced fic. But its not abhorrent . Its just super face u could have given them a good chaptwr to notice their true feelings or even two considering Harrys emotional and mental state due to the tournent and his life thus far. But 2 paragraphs in and a small remiencent thought about wet dreams. Is just a lazy writing if im honest. But immhere and i shall endeavor to keep reading. |
adafrog chapter 14 . 1/16 Loved it, thanks. |
pincho chapter 14 . 12/2/2023 Cute story, fluffy like you intended. The end was a bit abrupt and well boring, but ultimately it was fluffy. I really enjoyed the Spam. |
pincho chapter 10 . 12/2/2023 I wonder why Harry didn't do runes, it was stated earlier that when Hermione was teaching him he was enjoying it and was better than he thought, vs arithmancy which was never mentioned. |
pincho chapter 3 . 12/1/2023 Just so you know, that male only school name...is not what you either think or were told it means. If you ever see this comment, I highly suggest you change it. |