Reviews for Hermione's Brilliant Idea |
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Gina chapter 3 . 5/15/2022 Good question. I did read one recently that mentioned about the elves but no one would listen to them. |
WhatHaveIDiscovered chapter 14 . 4/30/2022 Really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing! |
WhatHaveIDiscovered chapter 4 . 4/30/2022 Just had to compliment you on this chapter. That ending scene/convo was great. On to the next chapter I go! |
yochan123 chapter 13 . 4/22/2022 voldymort and dumbbitch are honestly retarded if they think that the regular government with much superior technology wouldn't figure shit out from terrorism and find a way to track this group of suspicious people down. dumbbitch obviously did absolutely shit for the entire war effort both before and this time so good riddance |
Linda chapter 14 . 3/18/2022 Love the story and happy you put in they had there babies , or the ending would have been a bit sad. |
Guest chapter 14 . 3/4/2022 It was a pretty good story overall but the ending seemed a little off and weird, not to mention rushed. I also didn't like you writing Harry and Hermione not being able to get pregnant for most of the epilogue and then they suddenly get pregnant for no explicable reason in a second epilogue. You're not supposed to troll your readers like that. |
The Golden Valkyrie chapter 14 . 2/16/2022 Great little story. To be honest, I don't follow why so many reviewers continues with finding faults with your story. First off, it's a fanfiction, not the canon story. The character would never fully be the same, they would always variate a little. Secondly, while Football wouldn't be the obvious choice for Hermione as a physical activitet, but I really like that you give her something other than just books. Most responsible parents will also not allow their children to spend all their time in a library. Not least because it is not healthy not to do something physical. I spent a fair bit of time in the library and with my nose in a book. But I did also spent 3-4 hours in the stables and with horses every day. Fresh air and some motion is important! Academics is NOT everything! And quite frankly, it get's boring, when Hermione never does anything other than read and study. She IS entitled to do other things. Remus is a conflicted personality. He's very devoted to Dumbledore, because he let him go at Hogwarts, but that doesn't change the fact that it was completely Irresponsible. At least around the full moon days. And I find it hard to believe that nobody figured out what Lupin was in the seven years, he went there. The boys was hardly discreet! He funnily enough was also the only werewolf to ever have attended Hogwarts. It does smell a bit of nepotisme, doesn't it? (-_-) Otherwise, sweet story. Nice to be outside the british boarders! Traditions is a good thing, but not being stuck in the previous century. |
Lady Morrgana chapter 1 . 2/12/2022 Such a great story! Loved it! |
geenakmom chapter 14 . 2/8/2022 This was a great little story. Thanks for sharing it. |
Guest chapter 14 . 1/21/2022 That was a very fun read :) |
C3nterF0ld chapter 6 . 1/12/2022 her genius had no limits? I just think someone needs to talk Harry and get him comfy in his own skin. like a therapist that isn't his girlfriend |
Pudentane chapter 14 . 1/7/2022 Great story; thank you for sharing your talent. |
Cwhit930 chapter 14 . 12/27/2021 Great story. Like these types of plots where Harry let’s Britain tear itself apart. Thanks for this creation |
Littledutchiefirefly chapter 14 . 12/22/2021 What about Hannah Abott? And what about Bill's job with Gringotts |
Littledutchiefirefly chapter 7 . 12/22/2021 I thought that Theo didn't have his mum anymore |