Reviews for Rajmael of Clan Lavellan
scotsoe chapter 24 . 4/13
I laughed at the Men of Harley reference. A fan of Zulu, I imagine?
Rudeus chapter 54 . 12/5/2018
This has been a great journey, and I’ve thoroughly enjoyed reading your works.

I wouldn’t mind reading a sequel to this, you’ve after all kind of set it up with that paragraph about the next hero appearing in Tevinter.

I’m pretty sure you could make a great story. With how BioWare currently is (curse you EA for poisoning everything you touch!) I can’t trust them to even make a half assed plot if Dragon Age 4 come out.
YaoiHellian chapter 54 . 11/20/2018
This was a damn roller coaster of emotions and though I'm with Raj 95% of the time he could use a bit less yelling. Although, Aedan was a lovely bag of rage thank you for that as well as the sheer amoubt of blows to Vivienne and Sera's face. Thanks for writing!
Schnarf chapter 54 . 9/30/2018
im glad rajmael didnt go the route of promising to redeem solas. solas is the real villain of DAI, his hypocrisy is baffling. that being said, he is a great character.

rajmaels curse gave me goosebumps

im surprised sebastian showed up to the wedding. didnt the inquisition use their forces to help defend kirkwall from starkhaven? or am i misremembering

i had a wonderful time reading your stories, Powerslammer. i hope DA4 comes soon so i can read another great tale from you.
Schnarf chapter 53 . 9/30/2018
no not neirin ;(

gotta admit you got me, i was certain she was gone for good. i completely forgot about the amulet hawke gave her
Schnarf chapter 51 . 9/29/2018
"never once gave thought to how deep those feelings were" thats a crock of horseshit, it was painfully obvious that nethras & rajmael both loved her to death. lost some respect for her after that

why the hell didnt rajmael kill dermott after blinding him? the guy was effectively harmless, he could have finished him off in no time & then went to go help evanura
Schnarf chapter 48 . 9/29/2018
so i assume your hawke never found that letter orsino sent to quentin. would have been nice to see him connect the dots when orsino reveals he was aware of quentins misdeeds

i really have no empathy or sympathy for tallis, i wouldnt be bothered if hawke keeps his promise & kills her or if rajmael does for kidnapping eva
Schnarf chapter 47 . 9/28/2018
got a good chuckle when aedan called the maker a pussy.

this was a great chapter, might be my favorite of yours ive ever read.
Schnarf chapter 46 . 9/28/2018
i hope we find out whats up with sandal one day. i feel like he'll be very important in future games
Schnarf chapter 44 . 9/27/2018
the HoF, Champion, & Inquisitor fighting together, whew

tallis is from a DA2 dlc, yeah? i never played that one. iirc shes apart of the qunari. so that begs the question is she really loyal to them or is she an agent of solas
Schnarf chapter 43 . 9/27/2018
love all the added cameos

im also glad you displayed how much sera matured in tresspasser.

i wonder where eva got the journal from. perhaps from one of solas' agents?
Schnarf chapter 42 . 9/26/2018
that was great. was glad to see your cousland again
Schnarf chapter 41 . 9/26/2018
really cool that you used seemingly insignificant characters like petra, bevin, & amethyne & gave them important roles
Schnarf chapter 40 . 9/26/2018
loving this original content, its got me very invested.
Schnarf chapter 39 . 9/25/2018
yeah, i found descent to be rather boring as well (tbh i didnt find jaws of hakkon all that interesting either). learning more about the titans did interest me tho
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