ok, the problem got fixed

something happened to your second story.

when you bought skull into the chapter I feel like he's basically stumbled on all the stuff his sister did that cover his ass like the system is usually have a civilian life and then he can stick his nose into somebody else's business and likely going to give all that shitt away as she did a bunch of shit for him so I kind of feel like I mean cuz it's already done I really can't tell you anything to change it but I just feel like she is basically being used by skull maybe he's not doing it intentionally but that's really what he's doing

Renato is like 19 she is 13. Thats six years apart. Idk about that pairing.

"mou"?! Viper?!

ain't havin a stronger will makes it stronger?

I already knew this from other fics but fon really is a stubborn but still zen person ain't he?

ohohoho. rebornxoc? Im up for that

wow. from oct tlo dec real quick? thats a biiig time leap. not that Im complaining. Im quite excited about the ball

hmm. Im going for that, Sonya would prbly a sky or cloud. the possessiveness of hers is a bit.. hrmmm

oooh. This must've taken a lot of research

...Is the little kid Viper/Mammon...?

Re-reading this masterpiece again. I'm loving it more and more.

I'm Russian and I haven't heard word "peredniki" in the meaning of brats (in part XXXIV). "Peredniki" means aprons. If Arseniy was really angry, he could call them "otrodia". Or if he was less angry, he could call them "bezobrazniki" or "hooligany".

So, um, I haven’t actually read the chapter I writing the review from yet, but I had to immediately scroll down and comment on your AN, which implies that you hold very little skill in writing, which I find to be utterly untrue, and will fight you in all my tiny person anger over. This is the most well written and well thought out fanfic I have ever read. Please don’t detract from that.