Maybe Sonya will do the same as Colonello and take Skull's place as the Cloud Arcobaleno? Poor Skull didn't do very well in that crowd - it would be believable that a concerned friend, who is much more prepared for it, would try to take the role.

Also, I got this funny image of Sonya and Skull needing to pose as a married couple for some reason. And Skull introducing a grown-up Barbie-look-alike/bombshell, who is also the World's Greatest Thief, as his wife. And the rest of the Arcobaleno are like: how did that happen?!

Awesome story concept! I love Sonya and mini!Skull.

After reading your treatment of Naruto, I'm fascinated where you will go with one of my favorite series. Hurrah for strong female characters!

Hi!
Just wanted to say nice job. I've been following your work for a while and while I was blown away by Deja Vu No Jutsu, its nice to see that this story's plot will be a bit more on track. Another thing i think you could focus on a bit more is character development. In Deja Vu no Jutsu there were times that characters felt flat. Other than that I really love your work. This first chapter was amazing. You are truly incredible at world building.
waiting for the next chapter
:D

Looking good so far!

Holy Sht. This is gonna be a joyride because it's you, Vixen, in which I didn't expect simply because I didn't notice that author was you. But h e ll yes, something new: an SI who isn't born in the Tenth Generation's time. The only SIs I remember where they were born in the same time as the Arcobaleno are only two.

And a thief? The World's Greatest Thief indeed. I wonder if she's going to be an arcobaleno? Taking Skull's place? Hmmm. Possibly one of the Arcobaleno's contacts? Provided that she'd get involved although I can see that she won't. Possibly.

(For some reason I want her to be an Giegue Boss but they're assassins and she's a thief. Oh well.)

Anyway, I am very much excited on the AU part, the differences, the butterfly-effect Sonya brings. Aye, I'm keeping an eye on this gem.

I saw this posted and thought, "that author looks familiar" and then I realized that you were the one amazing writer who did Neko-chan's story! Boy am I excited to see one of my favorite authors write about my favorite show ever.
The first chapter was excellent in stating the plot, foreshadowing, and setting, but a little bit exposition heavy. Just a little, maybe its because I'm tired and keep dozing off. I can't wait to see where this goes, very excited. Thank you for your continued writing !

I think this is really amazing! I hope you update soon; I'm really looking forward to it!

Not only is this nice, intriguing, and long, but it's also an Arcobaleno-related SI. I really enjoy this so much; so please update soon!

Kukukuku! I love it! Kudos! IT's amazing! Love it! Update soon!

(We really need more Arcobaleno-related and SI-OCs in our fandoms!)

I think this is the first SI I've ready this far in the past dealing with someone other than Reborn. Three cheers for new concept! I love SI, and this is unique and not Mary Sue-ish so I look forward to more :)

Wonderful story as usual. The only nitpick that I can do now is on some wording for this chapter (and by some I mean one word), the grammar and spelling are great. This isn't really a 'big' deal, but remember that part where Sonya is remembering her other life, you chose the wording "girl" which brings an image of her past life as someone who ranges from the age of pubescent preteen to under 18. However, prior to that you said that she was a college student, which implies a 'young woman' where it usually ranges from the age of 18 to 25. You already told us that she's around twenty, so changing the word 'girl' to either 'young woman' or just 'woman' would be fine. Otherwise it's fine.
I enjoyed the story especially when you introduced Skull. It was very fun, and you can already see how his life will be latter on. I believe that Sonya will have to teach Cherep fast, because who knows what those drunks will remember. And they may track him down just to get back at her.

I really like this, cant wait for more

Lovely so far. :)

Awesome! Your stories never disappoints!

This looks really interesting (as usual), I can't wait to see where you're going with it. I know what you mean about the whole sucked into a new fandom thing, I got caught by Bleach just recently, and Katekyo Hitman Reborn just before that.