Reviews for Birds Flying High
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 5/29/2020
great! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
hikingurl chapter 1 . 5/17/2019
I’ve been missing you and your stories, Moosals. I know it’s been a long time since we talked. I hope life is being good to you.
rjh1960 chapter 1 . 6/25/2018
Cute story. I was thinking maybe she would turn out to be Bella's daughter.
Bevey99 chapter 1 . 10/15/2017
Good story. But how did she how his name from the very first? Thanks for writing.
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 1 . 9/14/2017
Lol! That was fun to read and, you know, it makes so much more sense than loving Bella! I know, it's blasphemy to utter those thoughts, but I actually never could quite oppress the suspicion of Edwards addiction to her blood was fogging up the lines between need and love. Loving her for who she is and not the chemistry of her blood singing to him. Maybe that's one of the reasons I mostly read AH stories, but I make exceptions and luckily so, I'm reading all of yours!
xox
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 10/19/2016
That was a lot of fun.
GaijinVamp chapter 1 . 10/10/2016
So Bella was right to chose Arthur. Edward was not her true mate. Obviously, if he can have sex with Enid, and chose to change her, then Enid is the one. All that obsession and first love was just that. And he's no longer worried about their souls.
grandmachix chapter 1 . 9/21/2016
I like that this woman was meant for Edward. Is it possible that her mother Was Bella?
Judy
nzjojo chapter 1 . 3/4/2016
What a lovely happy ending for this Edward. Thank you for writing it :)
SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 2/19/2016
Beautiful story! Thank you!
Denninelli chapter 1 . 2/4/2016
Interesting. Well written
CindyWindy1 chapter 1 . 1/5/2016
Though I've greatly enjoyed some of her other stories, I haven't read The Blue Hour because of poor Edward. But I still really liked this imaginative little story! Enid had a beautiful gift that was perfect for her and her mate. Nicely done.
ffictionreader01 chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
Sorry, but the name Enid just makes me think of old ladies.
jansails chapter 1 . 11/28/2015
I don't think I have ever hated the resolution of a Twilight fanfic " The Blue Hour", more than in it.

***And it was a fantastic story!***

But, Arthur betrayed the Cullens knowing how much the entire family meant to Bella.
That was such a deal-breaker for me, I could not fathom how it was even possible for Bella to move past it- to falling in love with Arthur?
Gobsmacked me to oblivion.
I think if Bella had truly, on her own, without Arthur's interference, decided remaining with Edward as a human for the rest of her life was unacceptable, & left him completely on her own recognizance, I would have mourned the breakup, but accepted it in the end.
I hated lying, deceiving, dishonest Arthur with every fiber of my being!

I would have loved for this story to be stretched out a little more, for the relationship or character of Enid to grow on me.
But, it was so fast.
When Enid straddled Edward's lap on the bench, I winced.
However, I do love "The Blue Hour" Edward was not condemned to the the same existence as described for the widowed Marcus.
Edward & Enid is a lovely idea!
jansails / jan2
sue1zide chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
:)
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